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I Am - serenity's challenge
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I Am - serenity's challenge |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I am a would be writer, an exceptional fighter I wonder about most everything, like all the things that make bells ring I hear the voice of poetry, rumbling deep inside of me I see the world gone mad with greed, and wonder if want beats need I want to live in harmony, with the childlike inner me I am a would be writer, an exceptional fighter I pretend I'm strong and free, living with natural harmony I feel strongly about unfairness, it raises my awareness I touch myself, there's no one else I worry that my grandchild dear, will not live to see all his years I cry at almost everything, even when I hear birds sing I am a would be writer, an exceptional fighter I understand that life's not fair, it the thing that helps me care, I say, write on or be well, it lets me stay the gates of hell I dream of being made quite whole, united in my heart and soul I try to live most everyday and make the demons go away I hope the future will look bright, and look toward the guiding light I am a would be writer, an exceptional fighter. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are... and this is... remarkable!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, this is utterly exceptional, it truly truly is. And everyone knows you are an exceptionally loving beautiful spirit, wrapped within a truly wonderfully passionate heart. Take care as always, live well sing strong and write to fill my heart with joy. Love Slushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 You describe well.... Fight on "Would Be" because I know that you Will Be an absolutely brilliant one. Very emotional indeed, Bob <>< |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Kethry, this is marvelous sweetie... Such a tender write from your heart... I'm smiling rite back at ya PoetFriend... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kethry--You are, and I love the look into what you think...great job! (PS Write on!) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I cry at almost everything, even when I hear birds sing your sensitivity shows in this *huggzz* Kethry ..very nicely done ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kethry, Of course you are, well done, loved it. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Kethry. Thanks Rich |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is nice, except for one thing. . . you are a writer. . . and an excellent one at that!! Great poem!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks for responding to this everyone. The challenge is great isn't it. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you are a writer indeed...and a good one too...blessed with a lot of talent and warmth...and that makes you a fighter too. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
there seems to be a lot of things that bother you and you resolve to come to terms with these things...that was what i gathered when i read this and thanx for sharing... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma and kaile, thanks for the response Be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you are exceptional quite already, Keth...challenge well met, dear friend--you really jumped into this one heart and soul! Hugs to you for all you do. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, and HuGS for all you are, thank you. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I see strength and tenderness rolled into one. What a good combination to be. Good write! Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deb, Thanks. That's me the iron maiden with the heart of tin. be well Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes you are and when you pen from the heart you always deliver a knock out punch. Exceptionally well done on this one my friend. |
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