Open Poetry #11 |
This Night......................................................................... |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This Night where is my love, when he comes home to people, places, things ~ he harbors such a longing a deep and long ago wish to hold within his hands the love of loves of which he thought he'd never know till now.... where is he, my love he who walks the night in spirit's form to visit dreams and holds me oh so tight where is he, this love, my love who harbors the longing so of a love, the love of loves which he thought he'd never know till now… where is he, this love this love that garners up my heart holds me tender in his voice knowing we shall never part where is he, this, my love who harbors a longing so of a love, of his love's light which he thought he'd never know till this night... 01.04.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely, Sunshine... he's a lucky man! *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He would think so Suthern, would he were to exist....thanks for reading.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, the Phoenix remember, shake your tail feathers love, if I can you can too. Wonderful beautiful and you always write so well, never ever anything less that truly magnificent. Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I will assume his imagination matches yours - if not his poetic talent - and given that - I'm sure - you'll be together this night |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sure, surprise him and then let him have it when he's least suspecting! I love these lines. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
He must exist somewhere, and I am determined to find him someday. Hope you do too. This was another poetry gem, love it. Sandra |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully written, Karilea! They can always exist in our minds, can't they?! Denise |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Harbor no more, he is there. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
sunshine, if he wasn't there, he is now....you have made him what he is with your words.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ If his spirit is walking, you'll meet him for sure. Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
surely, you shall meet him. . . on that night. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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