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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I feel like cherry blossoms in spring < !signature-->under a marshmallow sky baked by rays of the sun spread on graham cracker pie mere thoughts of you makes me weak heart flutters like a baby robin's learning how to use his beak you are sweet honey in my tea soothing my wanton lips your reflection in my cup watching you skinny dip you are my morning getaway begging me to stay joining you in your swim in pure pleasure of Teacup Bay A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A really good read... thanks for sharing, enjoyed! -Tier{Robin} |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Whew, where do you go to sip tea? Must be near Amarillo someplace.... I do like the reference to the food. The graham cracker pie sounds delightful. Love ya, Bob <>< |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Robin and Bob..thanks for stopping by for tea with me..ha..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Victoria, A wonderful writing from you, and very uplifting. The warmness of this could be felt as your writing was being read. BC |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts inhere....love the imagery....*wow*...love that a lot. great one Victoria..... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your descriptions, ~V~ are always so beautiful..I would love to live in your thoughts..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
These are very original thoughts and descriptions. Enjoyed. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I liked these words much. You are having quite a time there, aren't you  Sandra |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Victoria!! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you bill..i was drinking tea today since i have a cold and began writing haa.. i usually drink coffee in the morning.. charisma..thank you it was a fun write hugs wynter..thank you so much..hmm that sounds like fun haa..i think ha.. kathleen..well one thought always leads to another as you know hon..hugs thanks for reading sandra..thank you yes..staring into my tea cup..like a fortune teller haa.. denise..thank you denise ...nice to hear from you as always ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Victoria, this one made me very hunger... for both food and love, LOL, beautiful poem. Man I think I should get some food soon. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks brian .ha...yes i was trying to find a way to add some hershey to that pie haa..oh well im hungry too haa~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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