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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2001-01-04 12:19 PM



Oh me oh my
Get out of your 1950's fantasy,
You face shines with misery transparently,
Spew out that sobering half-assed victim rhetoric,
Make 'em all squirm while they chew on it.
It's a secret handshake and a passing wink of the eye,
As the witches bridge club weekly meets to pen the tail on the sly.
BUT THEY NEVER ASK "WHY oh WHY oh WHY"
"DONT WE RAISE OUR VOICES TO THE SKY?"
Instead you're mute and fawn,
Just waiting to die,
Like some kind of hopeless housewife,
BUT YOU CAN
C H A N G E
W H I L E
Y O U ' R E
A L I V E
And let 'em all know at least you tried,
To kill the demons inside.

Oh me oh my
Damn your transcendental paralysis,
We can work together and make sense of this,
Dont be so sure you can chuck it all away,
You've got to proceed no matter how bad you want to stay.
It's a natural cause and a comfort zone there in your head,
And the world turns away as you tap the snooze button in bed,
BUT NOBODY CAN HEAR A WORD YOU SAID,
YOUR HISTORY WAS NEVER READ,
Instead you're mute and fawn,
Just waiting to die,
Like some kind of hopeless housewife,
BUT YOU CAN
C H A N G E
W H I L E
Y O U ' R E
A L I V E
And let 'em all know at least you tried,
To kill the demons inside.



LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

© Copyright 2001 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-04 12:35 PM


This MUST have been written for me...into my library it goes....thanks.
serenity blaze
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Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-05 07:15 AM


*bump* because I INSIST...grin
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-01-05 07:21 AM


BUT YOU CAN
C H A N G E
W H I L E
Y O U ' R E
A L I V E
And let 'em all know at least you tried,
To kill the demons inside.


you are understood...huggzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-01-05 04:58 PM


What do we hopeless husbands do?
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