Open Poetry #11 |
Fanciful Love |
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I haven't written in a few weeks, so I am a bit rusty, here is an attempt at rekindling my poetic fires. I have chanced a glance behind the wall And had to pause for a cause that caught me unaware... My eyes they misted my hands fisted but a dream came to mind You sat so still as if to will the very earth to cease... Your beauty rare I so unprepared to experience your light Unless I may find no words to say I stayed low behind the wall... A child was I in your mature eye my giggles, your laugh How could you find love true? in a little girl like me... I chanced again upon a whim and looked over the wall You looked down on my startled frown and laughed and kissed me on the cheek... With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
||
© Copyright 2001 Joann Renee' Muszynski - All Rights Reserved | |||
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved the form..missed you and welcome back HAPPY NEW YEAR ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
||
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
dragonpoet, The sincerity in this poem rings through so sweet and clear. enjoyed reading this, and look! no signs of rust! *smiles* -Tier |
||
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is SO sweet!!!! Back to top with you my friend...I'm smiling over here now.... |
||
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
welcome back Dragonpoe....loved reading these wonderful expression from your heart. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
||
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dragonpoe, of course you are not rusty... i liked this light-heartened funky musing and hope to see more rhyming poems from you soon(i sometimes think rhyme can be cliched what with light, fight, sight, night...etc but i particularly enjoyed this)... hope all is well |
||
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Thanks all, for your kind words. I am going to try to stay up-to-date here and spend more time reading and writing. The holidays have really tired me out! Many smiles to you all With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Seems like a perfectly good plan, and it went perfectly. With an even happier ending, Greatly enjoyed Sandra |
||
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah Dpoe, good to see your SMILING face again, me friend. And if I were going to write a poem, this is one I'd want to do. Sounds like the dpoe I knew wayyyy back on AP...glad to see you back. My hearts been with you through the turmoil, what ever thats worth. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 01-05-2001).] |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |