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dragonpoe
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0 posted 2001-01-04 11:26 AM


I haven't written in a few weeks, so I am a bit rusty, here is an attempt at rekindling my poetic fires.

I have chanced
a glance
behind the wall
And had to pause
for a cause
that caught me unaware...

My eyes they misted
my hands fisted
but a dream came to mind
You sat so still
as if to will
the very earth to cease...

Your beauty rare
I so unprepared
to experience your light
Unless I may
find no words to say
I stayed low behind the wall...

A child was I
in your mature eye
my giggles, your laugh
How could you
find love true?
in a little girl like me...

I chanced again
upon a whim
and looked over the wall
You looked down
on my startled frown
and laughed and kissed
me on the cheek...


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

© Copyright 2001 Joann Renee' Muszynski - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2001-01-04 11:28 AM


loved the form..missed you and welcome back
HAPPY NEW YEAR

              ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Tiersdin
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Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-01-04 11:35 AM



dragonpoet, The sincerity in this poem rings through so sweet and clear.

enjoyed reading this, and look! no signs of rust!

*smiles*
-Tier

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3 posted 2001-01-05 05:50 AM


This is SO sweet!!!! Back to top with you my friend...I'm smiling over here now....
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4 posted 2001-01-05 05:55 AM


welcome back Dragonpoe....loved reading these wonderful expression from your heart.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-01-05 07:39 AM


dragonpoe, of course you are not rusty...

i liked this light-heartened funky musing and hope to see more rhyming poems from you soon(i sometimes think rhyme can be cliched what with light, fight, sight, night...etc but i particularly enjoyed this)...

hope all is well

dragonpoe
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6 posted 2001-01-05 08:18 AM


Thanks all, for your kind words. I am going to try to stay up-to-date here and spend more time reading and writing. The holidays have really tired me out!
Many smiles to you all  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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7 posted 2001-01-05 11:25 PM


Seems like a perfectly good plan, and it went perfectly. With an even happier ending,
Greatly enjoyed
Sandra

jwesley
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8 posted 2001-01-05 11:38 PM


Ah Dpoe, good to see your SMILING face again, me friend.  And if I were going to write a poem, this is one I'd want to do.  Sounds like the dpoe I knew wayyyy back on AP...glad to see you back.  My hearts been with you through the turmoil, what ever thats worth.

jwesley

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