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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-01-04 04:57 AM




On wings of love, I’d fly to you,
if there were but a way...
I’d swim the oceans wide to you,
and do it in a day...
Across the highest peaks, I’d climb, to kiss your smiling lips...
And sell my soul for one touch from your loving fingertips...


This heart has opened wide for you...
despite my solid locks...
And when I found it in your hands,
it came as quite a shock...
I don’t know if you are aware
that my heart won’t play games...
I’m praying you will let me know
that your heart is the same...


Yet, somehow love will find the way,
no matter what the odds...
And hearts like ours can never stray,
from off the path love trods...
While on our journey throughout time,
an angel guides our way...
If I could borrow of her wings,
I’d fly to you,
~today~




Write on!
-<--<--{(@


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-01-04 08:41 AM


great poem, Sunny, no don't play games, shoot from the hip!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


Charisma
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2 posted 2001-01-04 08:48 AM


oh my.....oh my.....please give me back my breath...this is one  breath taken piece my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2001-01-04 10:09 AM


I do believe you have wings already my sweet sister.  Beautiful writing and yes I think you are the greatest too.
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-01-04 10:48 AM


Morning Sunny,

Very nice Sunny, and well written. You do have that magic touch. I'm also open on ICQ.

BC

jwesley
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5 posted 2001-01-04 10:51 AM


Great piece Sunny1...I think you wrote the words for many of us...nicely done.

jwesley

Cerenity
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6 posted 2001-01-04 11:23 AM


Hi Sunny,

This is a beautiful poem here friend, you amaze me, thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Sunnyone
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7 posted 2001-01-04 06:28 PM


~~~ Kathleen ~~~
Yes.......straight from the hip, and I've had a few years to learn how to aim!! Ha!! Thank you, my dear friend!!  

~~~ Charisma ~~~
I am so glad that the feeling my muse put into this one came through!! Thank you!!  

~~~ Mark ~~~
Sometimes those wings slip, my brother!! Thank you for all the kindness you've sent my way........you are the one with wings in my book!!  

~~~ Bill ~~~
Thank you......and I know that you also have a magic touch!! Get over your flu......

~~~ jwesley ~~~
I guess these thoughts and feelings could go out to anyone with a beating heart. I thank you for your reply......

~~~ Cerenity ~~~
Oh......not so amazing, just blessed with a wonderful place to write that is full of good people and friends like you!! Thank you, my friend......


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


catalinamoon
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8 posted 2001-01-04 08:32 PM


Said it again, Sunny!
I hope your love is able to fly across the ocean soon.
Sandra

Sunnyone
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9 posted 2001-01-05 12:45 PM


catalinamoon.....
Many times lately I've wished for wings. Thank you for stopping by, my friend.  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


CocoBaci
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10 posted 2001-01-05 12:50 PM


SUNNY1, my goodness this poem just explodes with emotions and you surely touched upon mine sweetie....

Hugs2U for an incredible write

Sunnyone
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11 posted 2001-01-05 01:03 AM


~~~ Hi Coco ~~~
Oh, thank you, my friend, and also for the hugs.....(much needed at the moment). I love it when you read and reply, as your words are always uplifting!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


Jamie
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12 posted 2001-01-05 01:16 AM


Distance and longing sometimes gives wings to earthbound hearts... your usual lovely work S1


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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