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the red rose grow
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the red rose grow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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YOU---YES YOU, you must like this this simple verse of judas kiss all I ask is friend's free hand-- you act as if no understand... I think that you have made it plain... you are the shallow walk be'twain the gallows and the narrow plank the same tight walk that made love rank... YOU...all that I would avoid came wrapped with bow and celluloid-- but yet I know beneath the wrap, I hear the wail within the trap, for all my knowing, I will pay--and gladly live another day... Victim? No. I will not be. The corpse of what you cannot see... Gladly now, I decompose... the stuff that makes the red rose grow... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now if that doesn't fertilize the frozen ground then nothing will. Excellent penning my friend. But of course you knew that. Remind me not to ever come to you with my thorns showing. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Victim? No. I will not be." You've made it plain all should understand. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh come on me twin ... say what ya really feel ... dont sugar coat it baby...   Gaawwwwwd I love this poem ... and the poet who wrote it... to quote ya ... "yer so cool" later- me rose in the snow-gator me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you my friends...been SO happy at home...lol...But I thank you for your kindness...and yep, Mark, better be careful around me..lol--I'll poke ya in the eye with my pen!!! rofl...am I bad? I YAM. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wheee.....good stuff!!! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Good poem! You sure know how to put them words together! Deb |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ooh, I like this fire and anger, you tell him! Besides that, it's a great poem.  Sandra |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Serene remind me to hide the daggers. Wouldn't want to be at the end of your rage. Nice job Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Tell it like it by-gawd is ! I like the strength with which the line is drawn in the sand. *Hugs* to ya', gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm in a better mood now...grin...thanks good poet people...gawd I love this place! (It's so much more accommodating than a rubber room...) I'll try to think "cheery" thoughts now..grin. Promise. HUGS to forum. |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
There's a rose that blooms in twilight and it's wonderful to see It can live for many years even though it's sprayed with tears In a rock garden memory [This message has been edited by Quiet One (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
great lines.... "Gladly now, I decompose... the stuff that makes the red rose grow." yeah, sometimes it's the silt and manure that help grow the best crops.... it's a wonder i'm not the garden of eden yet... lol.... hey! maybe one day, huh? at this rate, we'll both have our own gardens of eden.... this poem ROCKS! love the angst! hehe ((hugs)) and btw, it reminds me of beethoven.... you know what he's doing right now??? (decomposing).... *wink* later, me e-friend |
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