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Open Poetry #11

dear one . . . .

Stan
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California

0 posted 2001-01-04 02:01 AM

     Dear one...

     Like ever spending,
       never ending,
         rays of warmth above

     Sweeter ever sweeter
       are the gentle ways of love.

     Softly ever softly,
       flow these feelings
         out to you.

     Warmer ever warmer
       in a love that's ever true.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-04 02:04 AM

And so once again love comforts the heart and warms the soul. Beautiful piece from you. Loved the way it flowed from one verse to the next

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-01-04 06:00 AM

I agree with Mark...and love is the main element of contented emotions and you're portraying it so well with these few short verses..thank you!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-01-05 07:18 AM

ooh...look at me...in the company of not one...but THREE lovely men!

This is just so comforting and soft and full of sighs...(serenity sighs...) battin' eyelashes...

and quick! somebody put a lock on this thread and let me be alone here with these guys...giggle

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-01-05 07:24 AM

feeling the warmth and love that you spreading here.

love it.

Charisma

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-01-05 07:30 AM

sigh...okay, Charisma...I guess EVERYBODY can come in now...sigh...some things are just too good to be true...*winks* to Stan and forum...and Stan?

It was good for me.

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