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lucky
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0 posted 2001-01-04 06:09 AM


and if

this big wheel keeps on turnin'
boy we'll travel far tonight but when
you are a shooting star and there's a
woman on your mind you'll come
to realize the only thing a man
can do is watch the world
go by life is just what
happens while
your busy

doing

other things.


A marbled paraphrase taken
from CCR. The Roger Miller band,
Bad Company, Marshall Tucker
and last but not the least
John Lennon

.




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 01-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-04 10:22 AM


I was picking out the songs as I read the poem... and thoroughly enjoying. *S*
Martie
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2 posted 2001-01-04 12:55 PM


Love this, Dale...rings so true, like you.
lucky
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3 posted 2001-01-05 04:48 AM


Thanks you guys... I guess their kinds are dead heroes.
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4 posted 2001-01-05 05:27 AM


recognized every one, m'friend...telling the age here...grin. Enjoyed.
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5 posted 2001-01-05 05:29 AM


Definitely last but not least! Great job Dale well put together!
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6 posted 2001-01-05 05:35 AM


oh yeah, recognize the tittle's when reading.....still love to hear the oldies..

well done.

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-01-05 07:35 AM


Lucky~
And I catch you smiling in song.
Very nicely done, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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