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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-01-03 10:15 PM



On the palm the eye is spewing
Words that lips were not to form
The eye cast shadow went unseen
Now come bearing foretold storm

In the head the eyes split reason
And the mind reeled in from fleeing
One impostor of the clone
Cleaves a universal being

The eye beheld in surgeon’s hand
A blast of air, a corrective cut
The iris blossoms and thus is found
A need to keep those big eyes shut

Eye in palm it gaily sings
Tunes from the ole bandstand
Number one on all the eye charts
“Eye Wanna Hold Your Hand”





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-03-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-03 10:49 PM


Walt...You OK?  Need glasses?  Maybe? Or should I be sending hugs?
Poet deVine
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2 posted 2001-01-03 11:27 PM


Um...ok...I came, I saw, I replied. LOL This is wayoutwalt!!!    
EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2001-01-03 11:34 PM


haha.. i like it i like it!
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2001-01-04 12:13 PM


hehe thanky thanky yuh
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5 posted 2001-01-04 12:19 PM


love it walt..just fabulous..

               ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-01-04 08:16 AM


a fab poem hehehe thanky Victoria
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7 posted 2001-01-04 08:41 AM


love it....like it....and it make me smile

Charisma

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