Open Poetry #11 |
Eye Doo |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
On the palm the eye is spewing Words that lips were not to form The eye cast shadow went unseen Now come bearing foretold storm In the head the eyes split reason And the mind reeled in from fleeing One impostor of the clone Cleaves a universal being The eye beheld in surgeon’s hand A blast of air, a corrective cut The iris blossoms and thus is found A need to keep those big eyes shut Eye in palm it gaily sings Tunes from the ole bandstand Number one on all the eye charts “Eye Wanna Hold Your Hand” [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walt...You OK? Need glasses? Maybe? Or should I be sending hugs? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Um...ok...I came, I saw, I replied. LOL This is wayoutwalt!!! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
haha.. i like it i like it! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehe thanky thanky yuh |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it walt..just fabulous.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a fab poem hehehe thanky Victoria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it....like it....and it make me smile Charisma |
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