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The Outsider
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The Outsider |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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The Outsider The outsider, alway's looking in, trying to fit in a proper place Instead, like a prop in a movie, there for show, so others will look good The outsider, never able to be what the part called for Instead, a spare part, kept around for good measure, or a measure of someone's else's good struggling to be worth more than an empty cup BloomingRose |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Deb. I'm sure many can relate to that feeling of being an outsider. Very well expressed! Denise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yup, yup, yup...got a hunk of me in there...know the feeling well. jwesley |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I love your choice of words in this one. I know what this is like too well. Great job, Blooming. Joy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You my friend could never be an outsider. This was wonderfully presented as usual and says alot about how we take some people (and situations) for granted. Take a bow my friend. Great writing. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh that hurts and you are telling it so true! |
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