How I long the fates to foil

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Open Poetry #11

How I long the fates to foil

Stan
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California

0 posted 2001-01-04 07:21 PM

How I long the fates to foil,
  and do the things I want to do
    free of worry, tears and toil,
      free to happiness pursue.

I long to find a faithful friend
  who's fun and don't complain
    and knows the way to live and blend
      the nicer things in sweet refrain.

The melody of life and harmony of love,
  in a rhapsody of fun and a symphony of
    sun and wind and land and sea,
      in life of song and poetry.

Walking, caring, talking, sharing
  working, playing, aging, graying,

   How I long,  Oh, how I long.....

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-01-04 08:07 PM

aren't we all longing for these things..
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free of worry, tears and toil,
free to happiness pursue.
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~yeah I love these lines....

Charisma

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2001-01-04 08:34 PM

Stan,
All of these feelings are out there, when they show up though ensure that they are true.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-01-05 06:06 AM

You're playing my song...I'm enjoying your work very much Stan...more, please!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-01-05 06:54 AM

Hi stan..very nice writing..welcome to passions

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-01-05 04:59 PM

This is the first of your work that I have read. Apologies for not getting here sooner. May I say that I'm impressed so far?

Beautiful work. I love what you do with the words.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-01-05 05:23 PM

Stan I haven't had the chance to read your work like I'd like to but I found this to be so down to earth amazing and poetic...may your love never die!

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