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0 posted 2001-01-03 05:33 PM



Eagle


With the sun above, and the earth underneath
soaring higher and higher drifting on a breeze
spreading wings wide open such a majestic sight
the watcher of the skies viewed on cherished height

my eyes caught you above, I'm filled with desire
while you are soaring to observe your empire
watching how you across the sky with royal pride
how I wished to be a part in your divine flight

Mountains whether ravines can't stop you to soar high
every single detail is seen by your sharp keen eyes
diving to capture some food for your own survive
and now your prey have done his last sigh

eternal snow on mountain range captured in your bliss
the beauty of your empire enclosed in nature's kiss
meadows and woods are subjected in your mightiness
bath in golden sunbeams, earth enchanted dress

and between all the glory of earth wonderful gifts
there you are soaring proudly, hardly to resist
in wealthiness of nature, flying freely up above
this majestic Eagle blessed with God's wondrous love.

Charisma




[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-03-2001).]

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ethome
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1 posted 2001-01-03 05:35 PM


I have to agree with you...truly beautiful and magnificent creatures...and you wrote this with so much heart....take care ... ethome
Kethry
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2 posted 2001-01-03 06:58 PM


Shyrena,
the images and the poem are both magnificent.
write on, in song
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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3 posted 2001-01-04 04:02 AM


ethome: yes they are indeed magnificent creatures......thanks for your kind reply

Kethry: thank you for your lovely comment  

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4 posted 2001-01-04 04:47 AM


Very nice Charisma...the picture and your words take me there...James
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5 posted 2001-01-04 08:18 PM


thank you for your kind words James...always nice to hear from you
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6 posted 2001-01-04 08:41 PM


Charisma,
Eagles for me mean a great deal, and again here you have touched my heart. What are you doing to me?

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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7 posted 2001-01-05 07:06 AM


Daniel: glad that I could touch your heart....and mmm....am I doing something to you....  

((hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2001-01-05 08:00 AM


very peaceful land lovely images...spiritual.. thanks my friend!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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9 posted 2001-01-06 08:43 AM


KoKo : your welcome my friend, it's always nice to have your comments...thanks for stopping in.
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