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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Composite Changes nothing if not complex and I use to be such a simple thing a correction awaiting alteration what a blush and dimple would bring an elaborate, multiple mix just waiting to be fixed and no one hears the song I sing oh yes oh no I've been synthesized waiting for the fuse to blow awaiting the critique wishing for mystique and microscopic analysis I think I need an analyst combine my compound survey my inspection hoping for some retro-correction simply awaiting revision before a main decision 01.05.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
(chuckling here) This is great! Nailed it to the wall! And believe me dear friend, we all "hear the song you sing!". |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James...chuckles are good...{~,^} thanks! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful blend of such a simple thing...blushing with dimples....no one listening to her sweet song...oh God please don't let the fuse blow...before the mystique is assesed by an analyst...and some retro-correction is complete before making a main decision to sing that sweet song once again.....Oh I'm so afraid that I might have understood this...THAT SCARES ME! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome...not only are you reading AND listening, but reacting...how that pleases my heart! Thank you! |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I liked this one, very good poem, thanks AP |
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