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King Poetic
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 3

0 posted 2001-01-03 03:55 PM

Feel the light which radiates from every word I compose.
Mortal beings stand froze, while the weak had choose.
To run away from the truth, afraid of what they might find.
90% of mans failures occur in the mind
Is it hell that we dwell, or maybe its manifest. It's like hell and heaven on earth, all the pain in my chest.
Builds up real slow causing me to pour out
My heart and soul with out care, exposing what I'm all about. Feel the pain that I feel, the sorrow in my heart. So you can understand how my soul has been severly ripped apart. Locked in a glass room, the air being sucked out fast. A manifest of our lives and how they will never last.
We were born to die, I only hope to die with grace.
Cherishing the day i'm able to leave this awful place.

[This message has been edited by King Poetic (edited 01-03-2001).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2001-01-03 04:36 PM

I hope the pain and despair I read is poetic license... or at the very least, that writing brings you some measure of peace. *S* Welcome to PIP... may the caring you find here brighten your days.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-01-03 06:59 PM

W*E*L*C*O*M*E TO P*A*S*S*I*O*N*S

Very powerful, if dark poem... enjoyed reading!

-Tier{Robin}

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2001-01-03 07:32 PM

We were born to die, I only hope to die with grace.
Cherishing the day i'm able to leave this awful place.

very dark, I think we have all had this feeling at one time or another, the challenge is to work through the pain and fight. welcome to passions and hope you can stay a while.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-01-03 07:50 PM

If that handle stands true then it is truly a privilege to read the words of the king of poet's. At least the king is not dead or not yet anyway.....but only a king could write with the darkest of passions and not worry about the results of the critics....as the King sir I grant you to sit on the throne of darkness but suicide is definitely a no no here...open forum you know(public)...rest easy on the throne king and welcome to passions!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2001-01-03 08:00 PM

Welcome to Passions first of all and please enjoy a long stay with us. This was a very powerful piece and filled with the emotions that most if not all of us go through from time to time but as you said in one line........"90% of man's failures occur in the mind" and that says much. It is the overwhelming truth and it is nice to know that we ourselves control so much of our own happiness by the way we see the world. Rose colored glasses are there for us when we can't find it ourselves. Enjoyed the read much and look forward to reading many many more from you. Liked the format also.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2001-01-04 12:10 PM

Welcome to the family!!! I enjoyed reading this and will look forward to more from you. Please check your email!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2001-01-04 12:36 PM

Welcome to our world...and such a sad powerful entrance you have made...I am a good listener if you need someone to talk to...

King Poetic
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 3

8 posted 2001-01-04 11:50 AM

First of all I just want to say thanx for all of the positive feedback. This poem is actually 4 years. I really feeling this site and I'll be posting here often in the future.

Peace and Love

King Poetic

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-01-04 06:38 PM

Welcome to Passions and we certainly hope you never want to leave THIS place.

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-01-04 06:51 PM

Welcome, King and what a wonderful feeling poem you have displayed for all to read... even though 4 years old..many have felt the same as you..

~Softsmiles
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

11 posted 2001-01-04 07:56 PM

Welcome to the Poet's Den, hope to read more of your work.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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