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Face of falsity
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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In silence I walk that I may capture echo's of your voice guiltless a dream lived now so dark is the morn cold, lonely, the warmth has left, leaving one confused and without the purest of greetings a dream lost between fingers illusive, weak, and with hope but nerve's rattle and hiss still, having to face the face of falsity a dream held deep within eyes, dimmed in a helpless state though never to be sealed a time, taken by tides of black shores Maree Russo 30 Dec 2000 < !signature--> "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent DA. . . I feel that we all know this feeling. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Maree, this is so heartbreaking, so sad. You have expressed the pain well. HUGS Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Again, I say this is sad....and well written, my friend. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very good....expressive.....  Julie :) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
All I can say is ditto. lol I agree with everyone else...this was sad but in that very same way it was excellent.  Leave it to me to find beauty in darkness. lol Wonderful Maree! Angel I am no one if not myself. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hugs! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm with you, sista!!! Face of falsity... hard to look at, I know... felt like this one was written for me... but sorry that you felt this too. more hugs? |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Wait, wait!! there must be some misunderstanding .... i just went away for a few days...lol... what hast brought on this dark mood O usually cheerful one. quit living up to your inappropriate name - just coz you write your best poetry when you're gloomy, that's no excuse. now c'mere and get thee under that there mistletoe ......~grin~  happy newish year wol |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Mmy...I think it's the title that makes it seem so despairing lovey... lollol... (Now I need to talk to you about the word albeit...) lovely writing as usual Tigs[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Beautiful! Elise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, Denise, Sharon, JulieAnn, DE, Martie and me Sista, thank you all for your lovely and sweet hugging replies I didnt think this would sound as sad as it apparantly does, it does stem from a sadness yes but this is a poem which I wrote months ago, well and I've added and trimmed it lol. I thank you all for your concerned Oh Sista, yes after reading your poetry lately, this could be written for you... so Hugs dear. Hey Wol, I am full of surprises arent I ? no seriously, like I wrote above, it is just me trimming and shaving and snipping a poem lol..... Oh so now Cowboy, you want me under that there mistletoe hey??? hmmmm this could be very interesting well there is just over 10 hours before we countdown the NEW YEAR! so whaddya say Pardner? Tig, you may talk to me about that word "albeit", (I bet I have used it wrong hehe,I am getting ready for another lecture!) as long as you stop bouncing around ok, tigerrrrrrr bounce! bounce! hey love the lectures btw  Well Thank you all for your lovely replies and for t aking the time to read Wishing you all a HAPPY NEW YEAR! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
DA~ God this was so sad and yet so beautiful, you've penned your feelings extremely well little one...well done Tracie~ ~HUGS~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
a dream lived, a dream lost, a dream held, a time.... Excellent! I like this one a lot. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Such a wonderful, powerful statement made in just a few words...Face of falsity..I must agree with serenity, hard to look at and yes this most surely could have been written for me as I have looked at falsity more times than I care to remember.Even so I truly enjoyed this peice...Very good work...Hugs and a Happy New Year to you... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Though dreams be swept from shores of black out to a sea of darkness--- the memory of them shall remain and become a lighthouse for our hopes and future dreams. I really really Love this Maree... Love it!< !signature--> Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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