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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Words of wonder |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Words of wonder Your eyes, the universe and that fleck of light within, Venus that first bright flash at dusk, a force which draws me to stare, to fall after sunset, the white that holds your darkness, a deep well of little-known you, and you skip on paths with skirts pleated words of wonder and Polaroid successes and they sink deep into your mind, a mind which plays like the fandango, you twirl and flourish a curving of your step to go, where you go Angel of darkness Dec 2000 "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Indeed, these are words of wonder. "Your eyes, the universe" This beginning is awesome. Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A perfect tribute to one of the most phenomenal artists I've ever heard...I think you just might like Natalie Merchant as much as me!  Anyways, gorgeous writing my friend! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Polaroid successes" ah, I do not have these!! NO, seriously, I love this, and good to see you again. The poem is a graceful journey and left me breathless and believe me, I like that feeling! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Angel girl you are a wonder! And so is your writing. Good luck in your schooling! I know you'll do well!!!!!! HUGz <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Maree this is terrific...... particulary loved fandango !!! (L)(K) bat P |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*may I have this fandango?* wonderful Maree. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
your words of wonder have described her well.... i will really like to meet such a girl,seriously..a girl who joyfully skips will make my day any day..  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--wonderful picture you have painted ...I can see her, and your love. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is sensational, definately will be one of my favourites. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Such beauty in these words...indeed words of wonder sweet DA ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
words of wonder? oh yes they are..... lovely lovely, (and yes she is......) Hugs to heart, me sista girl!!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
EagleScorpion, thank you so very much, glad you loved the beginning Krista, "I think you just might like Natalie Merchant as much as me!" hehehe you may be right hon Thanks for replying and your kind words Irish Rose, glad to have left you breathless Thank you for your lovely reply Angel Girl, thank hon for your lovely words and your kind wishes Philip, yeah I loved "Fandango" too. glad you liked my dear (L) (K) bat Sven, you certainly can! Thank you! Kaile, I remember skipping as a little girl, I felt so free, maybe I should start skipping again Well I hope you find that girl thank you. Martie, if you can see her, then that makes my day Thank you so much for your kind words.Eagleone, glad you like it, glad it is one of your favourites Thank you. Tracie, thank you so very much hon Ahhh me Sista, thanking ye muchly little one. hugs back hon "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
To go where you go I am sure that where-ever either of you go there will always be someone special awaiting the arrivals Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Dark Angel, I really fully enjoyed this beauty. Thanks. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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