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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-12-25 08:14 PM


Words of wonder


Your eyes, the universe
and that fleck of light within,
Venus
that first bright flash
at dusk,
a force which draws me
to stare,
to fall
after sunset,

the white that holds
your darkness, a deep well
of little-known you,
and you skip on paths
with skirts pleated
words of wonder
and Polaroid successes

and they sink deep into
your mind, a mind which plays
like the fandango,
you twirl and flourish a
curving of your step

to go,
where you go



Angel of darkness
Dec 2000



"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2000-12-25 08:21 PM


Indeed, these are words of wonder.
"Your eyes, the universe"
This beginning is awesome.



Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live?

Alwye
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In the space between moments
2 posted 2000-12-25 09:12 PM


A perfect tribute to one of the most phenomenal artists I've ever heard...I think you just might like Natalie Merchant as much as me!    Anyways, gorgeous writing my friend!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2000-12-25 09:20 PM


Polaroid successes"

ah, I do not have these!!  

NO, seriously, I love this, and good to see you again.  The poem is a graceful journey and left me breathless and believe me, I like that feeling!


"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
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4 posted 2000-12-25 10:53 PM


Angel girl you are a wonder! And so is your writing. Good luck in your schooling! I know you'll do well!!!!!!

HUGz

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Poertree
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Posts 1359
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5 posted 2000-12-26 05:52 PM


Maree

this is terrific...... particulary loved fandango !!!

(L)(K) bat

P

Sven
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6 posted 2000-12-26 07:45 PM


*may I have this fandango?*

wonderful Maree. . .  

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


kaile
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7 posted 2000-12-26 08:26 PM


your words of wonder have described her well....

i will really like to meet such a girl,seriously..a girl who joyfully skips will make my day any day..

Martie
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8 posted 2000-12-26 08:49 PM


Maree--wonderful picture you have painted ...I can see her, and your love.
EagleOne
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Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2000-12-27 01:00 AM


This is sensational, definately will be one of my favourites.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
10 posted 2000-12-27 01:33 AM


Such beauty in these words...indeed words of wonder sweet DA
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



serenity blaze
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11 posted 2000-12-27 02:44 AM


words of wonder? oh yes they are.....

lovely lovely, (and yes she is......)

Hugs to heart, me sista girl!!!!

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2000-12-27 05:51 PM


EagleScorpion, thank you so very much, glad you loved the beginning  

Krista, "I think you just might like Natalie Merchant as much as me!" hehehe you may be right hon    Thanks for replying and your kind words  

Irish Rose, glad to have left you breathless    Thank you for your lovely reply  


Angel Girl, thank hon for your lovely words and your kind wishes  

Philip, yeah I loved "Fandango" too.
glad you liked my dear  

(L) (K) bat

Sven, you certainly can!   Thank you!


Kaile, I remember skipping as a little girl, I felt so free, maybe I should start skipping again  
Well I hope you find that girl  
thank you.

Martie, if you can see her, then that makes my day   Thank you so much for your kind words.

Eagleone, glad you like it, glad it is one of your favourites  
Thank you.

Tracie, thank you so very much hon  

Ahhh me Sista, thanking ye muchly little one.
hugs back hon  

  

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
13 posted 2001-01-04 07:06 PM


To go where you go

I am sure that where-ever either of you go there will always be someone special awaiting the arrivals


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
14 posted 2001-01-04 08:07 PM


Dark Angel,
I really fully enjoyed this beauty. Thanks.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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