Open Poetry #11 |
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Spirits Unite as One |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Spirits Unite as One By Richard Maxfield 7-23-2000 In the forest green Lush growth so thick Life of heavens beauty Ripened for my pick Through the swirling mist Adorned in glowing light I see an elegant vision My heavenly delight Shrouded in silken robe Of royal scepter blue Delicate bare feet On green grass of dew Long flowing hair On soft shoulders lay Dream of my nights Reality of my day Roses blush red In her female grace Flowers bow their hear To her stunning face Voice soft and sweet Music to my ears Laying in my arms Calms all my fears Come to me my love I’ll meet you half way Show me your love Forever and a day Eternity in love Only you and I Spirits unite as one Souls set free to fly Live like there is a tomorrow. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
HHHhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.... soulmates dancing on the wind if time? Beautiful write and a plea that I would think any lady would have a hard time ignoring. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
maxtec1, this is soo cool your spirit was united with your muse to write this one. Stunning write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
With words of romance flowing from his pen his lady love with join souls with him. Wonderful, my friend, I pray you find the fulfillment of your dreams. Much love from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Richard..... I love the style you write you entice such a dream like a whisper in the night such soft words & theme |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely writing as always rich.. ![]() ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you my passions friends for all the comments over the past few weeks. Love and light, Richard |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
I agree ..I just adore your style and the way you express yourself so gracefully and romantically. This was an awesome poem.(but then, if you didn't doan awesome one,I'd be very surprised ![]() Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you KOKO. Love and light, Richard |
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