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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-03 08:01 PM


            Unconditionally

why are we so consumed
on how people look
it should be more about our hearts
there we are open books

it should be more about honor
and of righteousness
not in our appearance
or the way we dress

all should be able to face the world
with so much love to give
this is the true place
in which i wish to live

so to help change the world
and to set unconditionally free
i place this upon my shoulders
let this start with me



© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2001-01-03 09:06 PM


So very, very true. It has to start somewhere, and I am with you. That is one thing about Passions, we are not judged by looks, or other predjudices that create boundaries. Good poem, thanks for posting.
maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
2 posted 2001-01-03 09:11 PM


very good writing my friend. If we as people could over come what we have been tought and people should be who they are and not what they look like or have.
Love and light,
Richard

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