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When all is said
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When all is said |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Love builds walls of protection......... Even as it breaks down walls of fear............... Love joins two to become one......... Even as it makes one become two....... Love endures all things......... Even as all things endure love......... Love is weak as a child......... Even as a child is strong in love........ When all is said............ Say it with love............ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
eyesplus2- i like this alot!  your words always make me think... enjoyed it much. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
I must say this poem is deep in thought. I like it. I especially like the repetition of the word "Love" used in almost every stanza. I think it really emphasizes the point you are trying to send off to the readers. I must tell you this is my first time to this site, I am really enjoying myself. So please forgive me if I didn't critique you on anything, as I see nothing wrong with this poem. Job well done! I will make sure to keep my eyes out for more of your work. Have a wonderful day. Kelly |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When all is said..I love this one and will save it... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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