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The Call
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The Call |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
The Call Now beauty's ties are severed clean. And where's the sadness I have seen In sky And sea and inbetween. I listen as the bells ring peace. And through the silence of their call I sit and aim to have it all Or smile at beauty, my Marquise. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very Nice, Calming. Well done mattster Rich |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
great couple of verses you got there mattster. i enjoyed |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Hush, spiked and wayoutwalt, it's nothing special.  But thanks for your kind words. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
(smiling) Oh, I don't know...I think it's quite special. I enjoyed the peaceful reflection of your marquise. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You say much with very few words my friend. Enjoyed this little piece alot. Michael |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Thank you, Michael. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Belated welcome to Passions from a stray cowboy and I disagree with you..."it is a very special" piece you have given us and I look forward to more from you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellent, very well written perfect cadence .. reading it aloud was a pleasure ... so much spoken with so few well chosen words very nice work here, take care jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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