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| Open Poetry #11 |
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The Quiet Time |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Quiet Time I have resting in my spirit a sense of beauteous calm a quiet of no explain sagacity comes here again ~*~ through this amusing peace see smiles of soft delight which warms my every morn highlights my precious night ~*~ to share with me this view to know just the perfect one who questions never, ever, not the continual rise of greeting sun ~*~ here, within my quiet breast the tranquil of peace to reign know that this is now and when I draw closer to you again ~*~ in this trust of quietude trust with me this interlude turn to me as night begins as answer to all your whims 01.03.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's why I stay up all night...I told Maree once that it's like a giant foot being removed from my chest...all of the infernal busy-ness stops and my head can rest again... And I really do have to smile, as I related on another level. Just as I read this? The school bus came and picked up the kids after a LONG Christmas holiday...Hugs to you, and smiles for me...serenity sighs and sips her coffee...thank you, Karilea! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity, with time, all good things come...trust me! Now take the hot cuppa and enjoy a warm bath!....hugs, Sun |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
Beautiful |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, with me it never ever happens, when am I quiet, I probably talk while I'm dreaming. I know I never stop during the day. But one day I will just stop and let the silence fill up the spaces in me. This is as always a fabulous sagacious and wonderful piece from you love. And I love it as always take care Mushy  < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Peace and tranquility woven through every line....beautiful, sunshine  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! Serene is the word I think describes it best for me. Just wonderful. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautiful words. I love to rise and see the sun shining, but the night time is when I can relax and just love. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I pray you're not offended - but I found your poem so inspiring - I took the subject to heart and wrote some verses of my own. If I offend I will have my work removed. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Finally I can hear all that is not there. That is a sound that I can get used to. Wonderful write my friend and I already read Bill's poem inspired by this and it is remarkable the way you inspired that man. Take a bow my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quiet One, remarkable that you would pick this to read...welcome to Passions...I hope you enjoy your time here, and I shall be looking for a first post...[and if I have missed it, please direct me to it!] Marsha, I grew up "quiet"...people talk so much better that way...it was just when I wanted to know more, then I started asking questions....to each their own love...verily...and you know I love the word "sagacious!"....hugs to you... 'Deer, I am so very glad you saw the peace within...thank you for reading... EagleOne, "serene" works well here...thank you!... inot2B...yes, indeed...thank you... Mr. Yeats, I doubt you shall ever offend me...write on! and I shall visit it right off...thank you!...all I might EVER want to do is inspire others!... Mark...if I might share in the listen of beauty, then describe the real of it...it is all I wish...and for all others and everyone? I wish pure happiness... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, my friend, now this is love. Deep bow and applause from me to you. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, James. 'Tis most certainly...true...thank you Sir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, ...and peace and serenity to follow on about what this poem shows. write on,inspirational one. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
softly spoken i say yuh!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, thank you... Walt...just hear the whispers... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such a serene piece of poetry that whispers and yet shouts with every word. Well done and many moments like this for you my dear friend What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us. [url] [URL=http://www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I loked it up especially for you. With all my sisters dear heart I grew up talking, which is or course how I got into public speaking. Don't ask dear heart, really boring stuff to do with unions. But it did help that I have never been shy, and I can speak about what I know. But one day you and I will sit in the conservatory drinking tea and NOT talking Take care kid, it is a fabulous piece love majestiv Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, very tranquil and serene, your words have lifted my spirit. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ruth, someday...I hope the same...thank you... Marsha, seeing you as a public speaker does NOT surprise me... Brian, thank you, Sir, for letting me know... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beauty and peace are in the words you pen. Deb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kind comments bring winks...{~,^}...thank you Deb! |
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