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Open Poetry #11

glimpses of spring

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2001-01-02 08:45 PM

1)

weary willow branch
leans down to caress the earth -
regenerate kiss.

2)

a quick sunarrow
glances soft across my desk -
lessons become gold.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-01-02 09:10 PM

yes......love these haiku's...love the spring....
excellent penned

((hugs))
Charisma

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

2 posted 2001-01-03 12:10 PM

thanks Charisma

Happy New Year!

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 2001-01-03 10:46 PM

bumpin myself up....

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

4 posted 2001-01-03 10:58 PM

Beki,
Nice. Like the second one best. I love how the sunshine casts shadows across my desk too, well actualy on anything I guess.

Joy

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-01-04 12:30 PM

Beautiful images. Nicely done.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 2001-01-04 02:52 AM

thank you JOy and poeminister

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2001-01-05 01:34 PM

lovely haikus, especially loved the second one.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

8 posted 2001-01-05 07:45 PM

Thanks Brian, your name is new to me so I appreciate your reading

Breathe~
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 315
Washington...

9 posted 2001-01-05 07:49 PM

Here...I bumped you up too...

Nice Haiku's Beki...

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

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