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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
silver footed fog glides over rough green water - leaves salt on my tongue. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beki..... You just wrote a Haiku that describes the scene outside my window. Our water is green from the glaciers, and choppy from the storm that's raging, and the fog is creeping up the channel! I looked around to see if you were right here as I read!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Beki I could taste this one! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Sunny..you live where there are glaciers? wow....I guess ocean fog is the same all over and those who are born with seaspirits liek me can travel any ocean.  And Ethome..thanks a bunch! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hm... and I thought it was my ocean... I really liked this one Beki... Of course, I like ALL of your work...  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks Nan, nice to be back at Passions  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice..particularly liked the interesting last line... welcome back and write on! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks Kaile, I intend to do just that ! |
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