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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-01-02 02:30 PM


In the twinkle of the eye,
I saw your heartbeat with a sigh,
A smile, captured my soul,
From within, all my love,
Now, until the end of time,
In the twinkle of the eye,
I saw the love so sublime,
The melody of the rhyme,
Heartbeat within mine,
Twinkling of the eye,
Just a twinkle of your eye,
Told me of the love to find.
In the twinkling of your eye.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-01-02 02:36 PM


Oh, Rosebud......
What a light-hearted wonderful read!! This was great, and very appreciated, too!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2001-01-03 08:00 PM


A lovely poem. enjoyed this one.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2001-01-03 08:02 PM


Very wonderful my friend.  Looks like you caught someone with a little Rosebud in his eye.  
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