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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-12-31 11:39 PM

the moon
lights upon its speckled canvas
and peeks
through weathered seams

interlocking as buttons
through buttonholes
it gathers up the stillness
of your heart
to color the chill of winter
a summer gold

the moon's embrace
turning ice
to gentle snowfall

confetti white

will you take my hand
and walk 'neath speckled sky?
will you come to me
to warm in moon's embrace?

come...dance with me
in the snowfall
of your heart...

-dgvarner

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-12-31 11:53 PM

Beautiful images, dg! Lovely poem!

Denise

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2001-01-01 12:06 PM

Oh my! When the question is put like that yes is the only answer you could get! I do love this one.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

3 posted 2001-01-01 12:09 PM

*sigh* Wish I could write like you, Gale. Lovely as always, and I do believe I've read the answer tonight.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-01-01 12:28 PM

Beautiful work I really enjoyed it so much!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-01-01 01:25 AM

"confetti white" what a great expression!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-01-01 02:21 AM

DG~
This is wonderful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2001-01-01 02:23 AM

I hope you get that yes that you are looking for. This was a wonderful write my friend.

John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

8 posted 2001-01-01 02:32 AM

Your words create such beautiful images. A lovers moon can warm the heart on even the coldest of nights.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

9 posted 2001-01-01 09:50 PM

dg, how could one ever refuse such a warm offer in a beautiful write. Get that seam ripper ready...

Thank you for such sweet write.

Parker

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-01-02 01:33 AM

DENISE..i thank you!

EAGLE..'yes'is a good answer...

glad you enjoyed..
dont think i've heard from you b4--thanks for stopping by!

MAR..*sigh* ..

answers are everywhere..just have to find the one we seek...
good to hear from you

ET..so glad you enjoyed!..and thank you

IRISH..thanks

the confetti was originally 'confetti wishes'..posted a bit ago..a certain canadian sonneteer turned it 'confetti white'..read him

i was just answering back..

MARGE..i thank you friend..

COWBOY MARK..me too

thank you..

JOHN..i thank you friend poet..

...a lovers moon..

.....

PARKER..i'm hoping refusal is out of the question.....youre welcome....

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

11 posted 2001-01-02 02:22 PM

come...dance with me
in the snowfall
of your heart...

beautiful poem and who could resist such an invitation.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2001-01-02 05:46 PM

BRIAN..thank you for beautiful

good to be hearing from you

hugs, g

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

13 posted 2001-01-02 06:08 PM

Lovely writing. I know if it wereme you were asking I would come with open arms.
Love and light,
Richard

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2001-01-02 06:17 PM

RICHARD..teehee..your reply tickled me smiley..

that was very sweet....
thanks

hugs, g

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

15 posted 2001-01-02 06:41 PM

Absolutely lovely. As usual.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

16 posted 2001-01-03 02:17 AM

SERAPHIN..much thanks! and thanks for reading..

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

17 posted 2001-01-03 03:08 AM

Very lovely, vivid imaging! I even felt the crisp chill of the moonlight on the crest of new fallen snow. So happy I looked in on this one.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

18 posted 2001-01-03 04:59 AM

ahhhhh love these wonderful penned poem.....love the imagery.
nicely done

((hugs))
Charisma

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

19 posted 2001-01-03 08:11 PM

VAS..i'm so happy you looked in on me too

thanks for your very kind reply

thank you much CHARISMA

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

20 posted 2001-01-03 08:11 PM

oops..hit that button twice..!

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-03-2001).]

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