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Senryu's Love Song
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Senryu's Love Song |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Loving you I see tender eyes gazing at me I see your loving harmonious gift melodious song of thee I sing your loving sensuous song heard sweet, sweet song of rarest bird I hear your loving in the gifts of you reveling in midst of you I feel your loving gifts harmonious hearing songs so sensuous truly loving you 01.02.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
So musical, loving, and beautiful....... This is one of your finest, Karilea!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
You have put words to my emotions. Thank you. Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you make things look so easy....  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"gifts harmonious hearing songs so sensuous truly loving you" When those senses are out there like receptors and connecting two people then beautiful poetry arises from the hearts of the affected ones...hey!...just like this one! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know. . . you can't keep writing like this. . . it's just too wonderful. . .  excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yessssssss love these senryu's......excellent done (hugs)) Charisma |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, these are soooooo pretty! Denise |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like the first one best. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1, so glad to see you...thank you!... Ian, glad I could help...{~,^}... 'Deer, you don't know how hard I work at it...LOL...thank you... Ethome, what a response [and what a tribute...thank you!]... Sven, OK, I'll stop [like heck...LOL...] thanks!... Charisma, you rock with them...thank you!... ah Denise, thanks... Poeminister, me too! Thank you... |
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