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Touch the Keys |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Touch the Keys black and white sit alone and separate until you touch the keys like dipping fingers into milk and slowly, tenderly, making breeze touch with me feel the ease slowly glide your gifted hand across the keys of life pick me up and lift me in and ease me of all strife touch with me fingers that carry the stained and strained, carry refrain accomplish the gain zephyr along the gift of day long into the night Rachmaninoff me away touch me and hear the music touch me and feel the notes touch me see what you've wrought deep within your wrote touch me like the keys of bone touch me unlock the stone touch me to be yours alone touch me candlelight shall grace the gift of the music of your lift touch me and in the silk and satin day touch me as you shall play Tschaikowsky me in E flat waltz and play me never false touch me fingertips dipped in cream under light of moon light's beam and in this touch of E in the key of me a rhapsody sublime in the song of Karilea 01.01.01 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, awesome (and that's not a word I use lightly) write on, your song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
see what you've wrought deep within your wrote touch me like the keys of bone touch me unlock the stone touch me to be yours alone touch me candlelight shall grace the gift of the music of your lift touch me and in the silk and satin day touch me as you shall play Tschaikowsky me in E flat waltz and play me never false touch me fingertips dipped in cream under light of moon light's beam and in this touch of E in the key of me a rhapsody sublime in the song of Karilea ================== oh my ... your doing some amazing key touching of your own ... Sun this is an awesome write... what a poetic wonderous start on the new year you are off to ... very cool poem me girlie ... very jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, that is incandescent, utterly wonderful it really is. Truly you are an enchantress. Marvelous and I love it of course I do Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, I am overwhelmed, thank you... JM, only because you say so, and I've learned not to argue {~,^} ...thank you... Marsha, you must learn not to unmask me...some of us need our disguises! Thank you my friend... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krilea, You just went nova in the clover. A fine piece of writing. *L* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
VERY sensual, candlestick melting material is this. touch the keys like dipping fingers into milk and slowly, tenderly, making breeze It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Karilea...... As a keyboard player, this one has a really special meaning to me. You penned it with such style, my friend, and I thank you!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so beautiful, Karilea..that a tear or two slipped past my wall "of no tears day".. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, my!! Talk about romantic and sensual writing at its finest! I envy the man who creates the melody I'm sure you produce...this is wonderful, sunshine.  How can you always B sharp?  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is fantastic, what a way to describe the piano, I love it!!!!!!!!1 "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
As a friend of ours would say.... "you're way so cool" this is a real gem floating from music to poetry and back again...beautiful.. and you had to get Rachmaninoff in there didn't you...I don't know whether the great Russian has ever met his match..I am in awe of him...totally...powerful, intense, complicated.....oh this was great Karilea and you know what...I'm going to have to think about that Karilea song...hummm! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"the song of Karilea" continues to be written. . . and on every page in every note. . . is a heart of gold. . . excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Very powerfully written. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, always, always your responses cause the biggest grins...and ALL my teeth show!... Brian...what a line! Someone should grab that one up!...and thank you for pointing out favored lines... Sunny1, the line quote: came from a friend who was commenting some 35 years ago on the way my mother played...and I have never forgotten that phrase...thank you... Wynter, I hope you come back to read my thanks...for sharing... 'Deer, in response to the question...because I Rach...LOL...thank you! Irish, I thought you were taking a break!...thanks!... Ethome, you overwhelm me...thank you... Sven, thank you for the excellent... Daniel, thank you so much... |
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