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Open Poetry #11

Where Willow Caresses

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-01-02 04:37 AM

Where Willow Caresses

can you hear
your lover
while you sleep
does he sing
you into dreams
where willow
caresses cradle
your soul

can you hear
your lover in
your sleep
when the wind
catches his voice
on a warm
southern breeze

can you hear
your lover in
your sleep

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2001-01-02 04:40 AM

can you hear
your lover
while you sleep
does he sing
you into dreams
where willow
caresses cradle
your soul

Snow~
Lovely thoughts here, beautiful piece
loved that first stanza
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-01-02 04:44 AM

Great illustration using the willow...very well done ...I enjoyed the read very much!

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

3 posted 2001-01-02 10:50 AM

Dear Neve, I love each word...and the author, as well...Wink!

Robert Joseph
~enb~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-01-02 10:55 AM

ALL THIS WINKING IS MAKING ME BLIND!!

i LOVED IT ALSO

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2001-01-02 11:36 PM

Tracie, thank you so much

ethome, I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you;-)

robert, thank you love

Irish Rose.. heehee sorry about that ;-)
but I am glad you liked this , thank you.

Snow< !signature-->

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 01-02-2001).]

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