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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-02 06:12 AM


Mine Mien

sometimes I have it
other times
"see the Klutz"

I recognize me
and don't hold back
on reality

others see
existence of else
a bit of mien

O I would wish
it were mine
mien of yielding

come and gather me in and tell me
"you can" and "you will"
and thrill me with your words

such as I have never heard
such as I can only envisage
such as I would know your embrace
in words of this kind as you might reiterate

staunch the bard
as I dread to grasp
written word
fear of which I might borrow
and mine thoughts won't be mine, nevermore

and mien shan't be mine, nevermore

but with you
into the lee I shall bear
for you shall take me on to where
and never let me forget the care
there within your heart

for on a sailboat and
in the wake
mine mien shall find
its swell

the lift of heart
the ring of bell
and all lost treasures of the heart
for in my mien
all I need do
is look to the sun
follow its lead
and in the night

in the night

in night

I shall render God's speed.

01.01.01


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
John R
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1 posted 2001-01-02 06:29 AM


Brillient writing.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


Nan
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2 posted 2001-01-02 07:41 AM


Yo... mien 'tis yours since yore... no doubt..
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-01-02 11:12 AM


John R...I shall not argue if you say so, thank you...

Yo Nan...too cute...thanks!...

ethome
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4 posted 2001-01-02 11:22 AM


Your demeanor shall allow you to render God speed....your appearance as poetess at the cutting edge of creation shall ne'er fall because you are the hologram of ancient wisdom reincarnated...love this one it's excellent...ethome
brian madden
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5 posted 2001-01-02 01:43 PM


firstly ditto what Ethome said, because he is just so god damn better at replies than me. I will just say that I really enjoyed the poem, an excellent as always from the pen of Karilea.

such as I have never heard
such as I can only envisage
such as I would know your embrace
in words of this kind as you might reiterate

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-01-02 11:19 PM


Ethome, Brian...both of you are so very adept at colorful responses...thank you so much!...
Balladeer
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7 posted 2001-01-03 12:40 PM


I can....I will...
passing shadows
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8 posted 2001-01-04 10:56 AM


this one was just fixing to slip off into the next dimension of the pages of the past so I had to come get it and bring it back up to the top  

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (edited 01-04-2001).]

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2001-01-04 11:11 AM



Ditto all of the praise above...

excellent!

-Tier

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10 posted 2001-01-04 11:15 AM


a great poem, I loved every word, thanks
Sunshine
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11 posted 2001-01-04 02:14 PM


'Deer....something tells me I need to see you about a pig in a poke...

Passing Shadows...how kind of you...thank you...

Thank you Tier....

Thank you Agust...

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