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Mine Mien
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Mine Mien |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Mine Mien sometimes I have it other times "see the Klutz" I recognize me and don't hold back on reality others see existence of else a bit of mien O I would wish it were mine mien of yielding come and gather me in and tell me "you can" and "you will" and thrill me with your words such as I have never heard such as I can only envisage such as I would know your embrace in words of this kind as you might reiterate staunch the bard as I dread to grasp written word fear of which I might borrow and mine thoughts won't be mine, nevermore and mien shan't be mine, nevermore but with you into the lee I shall bear for you shall take me on to where and never let me forget the care there within your heart for on a sailboat and in the wake mine mien shall find its swell the lift of heart the ring of bell and all lost treasures of the heart for in my mien all I need do is look to the sun follow its lead and in the night in the night in night I shall render God's speed. 01.01.01 |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Brillient writing. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yo... mien 'tis yours since yore... no doubt..  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
John R...I shall not argue if you say so, thank you... Yo Nan...too cute...thanks!... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your demeanor shall allow you to render God speed....your appearance as poetess at the cutting edge of creation shall ne'er fall because you are the hologram of ancient wisdom reincarnated...love this one it's excellent...ethome |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
firstly ditto what Ethome said, because he is just so god damn better at replies than me. I will just say that I really enjoyed the poem, an excellent as always from the pen of Karilea. such as I have never heard such as I can only envisage such as I would know your embrace in words of this kind as you might reiterate It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, Brian...both of you are so very adept at colorful responses...thank you so much!... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can....I will... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this one was just fixing to slip off into the next dimension of the pages of the past so I had to come get it and bring it back up to the top  [This message has been edited by passing shadows (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ditto all of the praise above... excellent! -Tier |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
a great poem, I loved every word, thanks |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer....something tells me I need to see you about a pig in a poke... Passing Shadows...how kind of you...thank you... Thank you Tier.... Thank you Agust... |
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