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Flow Of Passions Delight
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Flow Of Passions Delight |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Flow Of Passions Delight Flow, flow, flow the blood through this my heart Beat out the moments let the love begin to start Like the river flows ever onward in its odyssey Seeking the arms of her lover the boundless sea So my questing heart seeks the flame to ignite And bring her laughter joy and passions delight Beat, beat, beat the pulsating rhythm of the night Pound out my breath as two soaring souls now unite Like stars exploding in a shattering climatic end Receive my love and spirit in this gift I thee send My hand offers you love and my smile brings release Come take the gift give your heart and spirit peace Blow, blow, blow the winds of desire and uplift me Raise me up to the stars I'll dance in their mystery Like the ocean so full of wonderful life and deep My heart rejoices now she has awoken from her sleep Take loves hand and join me in this burning flame And dance here with me never to feel quite same Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you EVEN SEE what you are doing, becoming more concise, and revealing even more? This is wonderful my friend! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, What! I don't know anything what have I done, how can I get better if no one tells me. Thank you anyway, but I don't know what you mean. Honestly !! Take care kid love Majestic Marsha (Neither very Majestic nor Mushy) tonight  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Take loves hand and join me in this burning flame And dance here with me never to feel quite same" Marsha--Lovely writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Poeminister, thank you so very muchly, sometimes I think I can almost reach what I'm after. Almost, but not quite, and if Kari or anyone else would guide me I might even know in which direction to go. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee my lady friend you have such a romantic heart. Your writing touches me. Love and light, Richard |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, the only guidance you need is your bright and shining heart which will lead you to wherever you want to go, and some places you only dream about. Beautiful, beautiful write the shortened metre really works for you here. write on,write long (or short, whatever works) Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard love, thank you very muchly love, it really is so appreciated. Take care kid Love Mushy Kethry love, as always you my smile giver raise my spirits and I smile. The office will be relieved, for when I'm not my usual self, they all have to work, WORK HARD. My sisters use to tease me and call me by one of my other names at times like this. The vile name which I utterly destest, if my mam had to give me so many names why couldn't she have chosen all ones that were nice. It could have been worse I suppose, she did tell me she fancied the name Titania. Now that would have been bad news. Take care love Slushy Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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