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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-01 06:17 PM


Flow Of Passions Delight


Flow, flow, flow the blood through this my heart
Beat out the moments let the love begin to start
Like the river flows ever onward in its odyssey
Seeking the arms of her lover the boundless sea
So my questing heart seeks the flame to ignite
And bring her laughter joy and passions delight

Beat, beat, beat the pulsating rhythm of the night
Pound out my breath as two soaring souls now unite
Like stars exploding in a shattering climatic end
Receive my love and spirit in this gift I thee send
My hand offers you love and my smile brings release
Come take the gift give your heart and spirit peace

Blow, blow, blow the winds of desire and uplift me
Raise me up to the stars I'll dance in their mystery
Like the ocean so full of wonderful life and deep
My heart rejoices now she has awoken from her sleep
Take loves hand and join me in this burning flame
And dance here with me never to feel quite same


Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-01 06:22 PM


Do you EVEN SEE what you are doing, becoming more concise, and revealing even more? This is wonderful my friend!
Marsha
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2 posted 2001-01-01 06:36 PM


Kari love, What! I don't know anything what have I done, how can I get better if no one tells me.

Thank you anyway, but I don't know what you mean. Honestly !!
Take care kid
        love
              Majestic Marsha
        (Neither very Majestic nor Mushy)
                 tonight
                    



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-01-01 07:08 PM


"Take loves hand and join me in this burning flame
And dance here with me never to feel quite same"


Marsha--Lovely writing.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Marsha
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4 posted 2001-01-01 09:18 PM


Poeminister, thank you so very muchly, sometimes I think I can almost reach what I'm after. Almost, but not quite, and if Kari or anyone else would guide me I might even know in which direction to go.
Take care
              Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



maxtec1
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5 posted 2001-01-02 12:44 PM


Gee my lady friend you have such a romantic heart. Your writing touches me.
Love and light,
Richard

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6 posted 2001-01-03 05:10 AM


Mushy,
the only guidance you need is your bright and shining heart which will lead you to wherever you want to go, and some places you only dream about.
Beautiful, beautiful write the shortened metre really works for you here.
write on,write long (or short, whatever works)
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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7 posted 2001-01-03 12:47 PM


Richard love, thank you very muchly love, it really is so appreciated. Take care kid  
Love
              Mushy
                  
Kethry love, as always you my smile giver raise my spirits and I smile. The office will be relieved, for when I'm not my usual self, they all have to work, WORK HARD.
My sisters use to tease me and call me by one of my other names at times like this. The vile name which I utterly destest, if my mam had to give me so many names why couldn't she have chosen all ones that were nice. It could have been worse I suppose, she did tell me she fancied the name Titania. Now that would have been bad news.
Take care love
                 Slushy Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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