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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-01-01 03:42 AM


How I wish I could undo
any grief I caused to you...
I was thoughtless, UNAWARE,
how could I not know that you cared?
The kindness that's
been shown to me
has changed me...
(yes, was alchemy)
it's hard to type
on bended knee
but tell me please
you'll still love me
in spite of my stupidity....



© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-01 04:08 AM


Serenity~
We LOVE you and that's why we care so much.
Big hugs and lots of love !
You can come out of your room now.
All is forgiven.

I am sure that when you love someone,
you have a tendency to take their words seriously.
Sometimes we forget that we're poets ...
we're not supposed to make sense !

Aren't you glad you've got such a BIG family ?
Love ya,
~*MotherHen*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-01-01 04:15 AM


thank you mom. you always seem to say what I need to hear, right when I need to hear it. I'll make this one up to you somehow. (I feel so awful about the entire thing...) HUGS
tracie66
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3 posted 2001-01-01 07:26 AM


I don't know what you've done but hey hon it can't be all that bad   and you've written such a heartfelt plea here I'm sure all will be forgiven.
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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4 posted 2001-01-01 08:25 AM


Love ya ta death Celeste...no pun intended! let's see ya smile....ethome
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-01-01 08:33 AM


Shows how good of a poet you are, getting people to believe it all...hugs to you little one...
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-01-01 08:44 AM


No need for sorry's baby ...
and we all learn a valuable lesson AGAIN ...
how many times has sweet Michael our prince of darkness reminded us about taking EVERY word and metaphor TOO literaly ...
not every word we write is a confession(goodthing) (teehee)all our posts would get a moderator lock LOL
SO ... we owe you an IM SORRY too ...
*sigh* ... and remember...better safe than sorry too ...
live and learn baby...thats why we are here...
and besides lovie...
we couldnt be mad at you for long...
your a Mardi-gras poet   *winkiewinkie*
HAPPY NEW YEAR ME TWIN
LOVE YOU!!!!!!!
me

*mother hen goes clucking back to hen house* LOL



Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2001-01-01 08:50 AM


not quite sure why you are sorry..I had read one poem and yes it brought me to wondering..but I had talked to you earlier and  such a strong will you have, I knew that it was a "moment in time" and hopefully it would pass...huggzz and glad it did

~Wynter..thinking warm thoughts for you


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2001-01-01 08:55 AM


We are just all happy as heck that you are okay.  You don't stop lovin someone because they made a mistake even if it did give JM a few dozen MORE gray hairs.  She looks good in it. LOL

HAPPY NEW YEAR

doreen peri
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9 posted 2001-01-01 09:28 AM


awwwwww geeeez.... you don't need alchemy... you're already gold... sorry? for what? don't be sorry... it's ok....you should be very happy that so many people love you so much...
now... go party or something...hehe... it's a new year! happy new year! go write some poetry with a bunch of really cool metaphors ... i know you can do it... hehe *wink*
sssssmmmmmmiiiillllleeeee

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2001-01-01 10:18 AM


My friend, I missed the first half of this, AGAIN (I would swear I read all day yesterday..)
But you are a wonderful, special, warm hearted poet, so whatever it was, I bet no one is upset with you anymore.
Love you
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-01-01 10:39 AM


how could I not love you???  

just promise me that you'll feel the same way when I do something stupid. . .  

love ya, you wonderful person you. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Irish Rose
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12 posted 2001-01-01 10:42 AM


yes we do!  you're not "stupid" that word should be erased from Websters.  Bless you!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



WhtDove
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13 posted 2001-01-01 11:43 AM


Serenity, I don't know why you apologize once again.  You know we love ya. We all have struggles girl. But this is a New Year.
Start it out knowing that people care for you deeply.

That you're worth more than Gold in your Creators eyes. And in ours too. And your loved always NO MATTER what!  

BIG HUGS to ya Karen!

Nan
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14 posted 2001-01-01 01:09 PM


If we didn't love ya, we wouldn't be worrying about ya... You're stuck with us...
RobertB
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Champaign, IL
15 posted 2001-01-01 01:19 PM


been there done this......for sure
SpitFire
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16 posted 2001-01-01 02:41 PM


~Hughughughughughughughughughughughughughug~
*Peace You.*

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
17 posted 2001-01-01 10:11 PM


I agree with Kathleen..the word 'stupid' should be erased from every dictionary and everyone's vocabulary. There is NO way you could have been stupid! Not you... I won't believe it...after all, you've got that Pulitzer Prize winning novel on the tip of your fingers... now smile! There is nothing to forgive.  
spiked
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18 posted 2001-01-01 10:47 PM


This is a wonderful piece Serenity. If you haven't been forgiven let me take the time to do so. You have touched me with this one.
Thanks
Rich

Dark Angel
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19 posted 2001-01-02 06:26 AM


Hey Sista!!

Love and Hugs Honey!

Maree


"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


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