Open Poetry #11 |
Soothe Me...2000th Post |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
When you say "I love you" I feel it warms my soul like sunburn within I see love in the depths of your eyes I hear it within the lullaby of my heart swimming are we, in an ocean of love drowning in the reflection of each other love is written within scrolls of your soul passion fruit, your lips, sweetens each kiss your touch gentle as a new born fawn your love awakens as the sunrise at dawn flowing slowly over the shores of my body tender kisses burn with rays of passion we sunbathe in the sands of sincerity soothe me with fragrant oils of our love A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Mmm,...this is lovely Lady Victoria! Happy 2000th post and New Year! *Peace. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Congratulations on 2000, and a lovely one it is, too! Miss seeing you at the Pub. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your love awakens as the sunrise at dawn flowing slowly over the shores of my body very beautiful posting..congrats...to you on this 2000th...huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on 2000! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful, passionate, sensual. Congrats on this being your 2000th! Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
congrads on the 2000 th post, marked with this beautiful and tender poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very well done I like much |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria this is wonderful, utterly fabulous Congratulations on 2000 it is a delightful post to mark it with to. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A sensual soothe...an enjoyable 2000...you do have a way of soothing...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*Congratulations with your 2000th post....and you celebrate it with a lovely gem. wonderful done....looking forward for another 2000..... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful words of love. Happy 2000th, may there be many more. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Victoria, Congratulations!! The time goes quickly doesn't it? Looking forward to many more from you. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you spitfire ..kcsgrandma..wynter sunshine..poemininster ..brian and robert...appreciate your kind comments today..HUGS TO ALL.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
marsha.. james.. charisma.. sandra and kathleen thank you for peeking in ..lovely hearing from you on this new years day..love you all.. Hugs ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is TWO GRAND!! signed, Balladeer a/k/a Stranger on the Shore |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful poem Victoria. And congratulations on number 2000!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ Just lovely. Many more we will see from you. Congratulations. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved the feel and love in your poem. very good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! Great 2000th post Victoria Well done and CONGRATULATIONS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! Victoria what a beautiful job of writing picture passages of love...beautiful metaphors of illustration that just steal the heart of the reader...wonderful write for your 2000th and congrats on that for sure!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Deery..welcome stanger...and you do look GRAND..now put your clothes back on haa Poet deVine..thank you so much..i missed #1000..almost missed this one Marge..hopefully Marge...thank you for peeking in Rich..Feel is nice haa..thanks for visiting Rich ethome..thank you ..and a wonderful reader you are ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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