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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-01-01 02:32 AM

New Thoughts

Alright God
I will if you will if she will.
If you don't want to
there's nothing I can do to change your mind.
And if she doesn't want to
I'm only wasting my precious time.
But alright if this ain't working out
the way we all want it to
I'm completely willing to try someone new.
Why waste any more time on this one
if we are in fact already thru.
I'm willing to change my vocabulary
thinking perhaps she wasn't meant for me.
Don't really want to live my life
in a lie or an illusion.
Let me follow this thru to a logical conclusion.
I'm entitled to my feelings.
I can think new thoughts as well.
Will it be jackie in my arms
or will it be Michelle my belle.
And even thou I believe in answers I already know
only time and Jackie and Michelle will reveal
the innermost thoughts only hearts can feel.

Jameslee@December27,2000
WellJackieLeeandMichellemybelle
theywerethebestoffriends.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-01 02:56 AM

In time comes all the answers even if they aren't the ones we expect or want. Wonderful write my friend. Hope your holidays were great. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-01-01 09:41 AM

Alright God
I will if you will if she will.
If you don't want to
there's nothing I can do to change your mind.
And if she doesn't want to
I'm only wasting my precious time.
But alright if this ain't working out
the way we all want it to
I'm completely willing to try someone new.
Why waste any more time on this one
if we are in fact already thru.
I'm willing to change my vocabulary
thinking perhaps she wasn't meant for me.
==============
ya know what SBJ ... this is a really cool poem and a different "style" of writing too..
but it suits ya perfectly
good luck with the ladies ... it aint ever easy is it

take care
jm

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-01-01 09:57 AM

I hope you get the answers you are seeking James ... powerfully written, with determination and fortitude, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-01-01 10:11 AM

The answers must be there James, I hope they show themselves soon.
Great write.
Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-01 10:55 AM

James, only change your vocabulary
slightly...and the "we" shall be...

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