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Melting Memories |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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a picturesque day in city of Amarillo frozen trees are white as snow branches have turned to icicles candelabras in moonlight aglow the trees are beautiful in Amarillo not a robins nest nor black crow they welcome in two thousand and one with purity like the driven snow the last day of December the memories will melt away candelabras are lit in Amarillo skies are powder white not blue if only our love had not melted with my arms still around you tomorrow is a new beginning budding leaves will bloom again icicles come and go just like you did then candelabras are aglow in Amarillo like our love was back when < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-01-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful be well Happy New Year |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sunshine...and for peeking in  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very very veryyyyyy cool! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, I have the same white trees here in NH, and the same melting memories. Wonderful poem. Be happy. Sandra |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful, Victoria. Lovely! Denise |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! such pictures you paint with your words, excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Victoria...this is SO lovely wonderful imagery... I bet that is an AWESOME sight to see all those candles lit... very cool poem, indeed Happy New Year take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sounds like too cold a day for Amarillo..so there's something new for the poet a writing! This is so sad but so beautiful...candelabras burning with the skies powder white...candelabras are aglow in Amarillo .... like our love was back then....wonderful write!..........ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you all very much for reading..and happy new year to all of you.. HUGS ~Victoria~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
skies are powder white not blue if only our love had not melted with my arms still around you very beautiful and to the "point" as always, ~V~ hope last night was nice for you...*s ~Wynter ((huggzz)) to warm your cold. "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Wynter..actually it melted in September haa..oh well..HAPPY NEW YEAR hon...HUGS ~Victoria~ |
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