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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2000-12-31 04:28 PM



Savored memories
delightful words
sharing sunsets
awaiting the night
sharing stars
wondering about love,
can I know you?
~*~
Morning dawns
bright with hope
the waiting starts
you speak again,
but for the last time...

-Tier{R.T.}


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-12-31 04:45 PM


Sad and beautiful, Tier. Very well written!

Denise

brian madden
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2 posted 2000-12-31 04:55 PM


Savored memories
delightful words
sharing sunsets
awaiting the night
sharing stars
wondering about love,
can I know you?
~*~
Morning dawns
bright with hope
the waiting starts
you speak again,
but for the last time...

I can relate to this poem, especially the first part and especially the place (Australia). A beautifully penned poem.



It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2000-12-31 05:09 PM



Thank you, Denise, I appreciate your reading and commenting,as always... *smiles*

Thanks Brian, it was written three years ago about another poet/friend.

-Tier

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-12-31 05:12 PM


A sad ending, but it is a very beautiful poem.
Deb

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2000-12-31 06:04 PM




Thank you for your kind words, Deb, very nice of you to say...

-Tier{Robin}

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6 posted 2000-12-31 07:16 PM


TiersDin~
Very nice thoughts.
Enjoyed reading this -
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2000-12-31 07:20 PM


Whether the write of today
or the write of yesterday
May I Relate?

Thought so...

well done Tier...

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8 posted 2000-12-31 07:52 PM


this is perfect. . .

soft and tender. . . wonderful Tier. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Tiersdin
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9 posted 2000-12-31 07:52 PM



Marge: I'm glad you enjoyed reading. A very nice compliment coming from such an accomplished writer! *smiles*

Sunshine: *chuckles* indeed!
your comments are always a joy to recieve... *smiles*

-Tier{Robin}




[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 12-31-2000).]

Tiersdin
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10 posted 2000-12-31 08:00 PM




Sven: Thank you for such a sweet comment...

*smiles*
-Tier{Robin}

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