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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Savored memories delightful words sharing sunsets awaiting the night sharing stars wondering about love, can I know you? ~*~ Morning dawns bright with hope the waiting starts you speak again, but for the last time... -Tier{R.T.} |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful, Tier. Very well written! Denise |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Savored memories delightful words sharing sunsets awaiting the night sharing stars wondering about love, can I know you? ~*~ Morning dawns bright with hope the waiting starts you speak again, but for the last time... I can relate to this poem, especially the first part and especially the place (Australia). A beautifully penned poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Denise, I appreciate your reading and commenting,as always... *smiles* Thanks Brian, it was written three years ago about another poet/friend. -Tier |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A sad ending, but it is a very beautiful poem. Deb |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you for your kind words, Deb, very nice of you to say... -Tier{Robin} |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TiersDin~ Very nice thoughts. Enjoyed reading this - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whether the write of today or the write of yesterday May I Relate? Thought so... well done Tier... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is perfect. . . soft and tender. . . wonderful Tier. . .  -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Marge: I'm glad you enjoyed reading. A very nice compliment coming from such an accomplished writer! *smiles* Sunshine: *chuckles* indeed! your comments are always a joy to recieve... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven: Thank you for such a sweet comment... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} |
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