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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the music begins and he looks around she's not there she said she would be he smiled as he thought about their time together she had told him he was her heart she loved him with all of it the music ended, another song began that's when the rose came and on the card, "save the last dance for me. . ." ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, this is so sweet, Sven! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahhh...*sighs* this is so beautiful and sweet. You have the most romantic heart Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look one more time around 11:59.... she'll be there that dance is for her... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a romantic coincidence ... there sure seems to be a lot of dancing going on today ... guess theres no better way to bring in the new year well done poet sir jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ummmm... well.. my dance card's sorta full... isn't it???.... but... love the poem! .... and who knows? it isn't 11:59 yet, is it? hehe... great write... romance-writer.... the romanticism made my head spin!!  - if you want it, come and get it... for cryin' outloud! - david gray |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So much romance in your heart, I wish for you to find your true happiness this year. This is beautiful. Sandra |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Well, if she doesn't show up in time go find someone else who will appreciate your sweetness. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Love this one! A rose and a dance....sweet romance! Deb |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, May you have all the dances your heart desires in the new year. Beautiful! Much love and Happy New Year, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Deinse, thank you my friend. . .  Melissa, thank you. . . figured that we could all use a little of that tonight. . . Sunshine, I'll have my watch set. . . I hope that she's there. . . JM, you've got that right. . . to dance in the New Year. . . all I need now, is a partner. . .  Doreen, wow!! I made your head spin?? Now that's a compliment!! And I might have a full dance card by the time that this is over!! Sandra, I wish the same for you my wonderful friend. . . thank you. . . inot2B, sure thing. . . you know anyone?? Thank you my friend. . .Deb, thanks!! Glad that you like it. . . what other way is there?? Elise, same to you my friend. . . and, if your dance card's not too full later. . . come and find me. . . much love to you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a romantic thought...very lovely sven the last dance is always the best..if with the right partner that is ha ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah, you sweet romantic ... another treasure from you. Beautiful ending Sven, or rather ... beautiful beginning? Lovely! Best wishes for a wonderful New Year! /Kit |
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