Open Poetry #11 |
Night of Dance ( Inspired by Victoria's poem ) |
maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Okay I woke up in a mood and read Victoria's poem and it set me off. Night of Dance By Richard Maxfield 12-31-2000 Roaring fire rages Drooling strawberries drip Bodies softly swaying To a hypnotic beat Lover’s eyes so deep Fingers playing on skin Lips brush your cheek Warm is my breath A kiss on your eyelids Fingers in your hair Bodies pressing tight Restless hormones rage Hands sliding down On bare back Lovers entwine Passion on the fly Soft gentle sigh Bite my lower lip Melting into one Hearts pounding fast Come dance with me By the fire light bright We shall spin to heaven On this wondrous night |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Richard! Passionate! Seems to be a lot of raging hormones around here lately! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ohhhh yess haa..my poem "The silken stalk"..It most certainly did inspire you ha.. ..enjoyed Richard... and thank you, always nice to know when i inspire someone ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well here I am....how can a woman resist such a dance... love it. Happy new year. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Ladies for youe wonderfulcomments. Loveand light, Richard |
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