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Please Mr. D.J. ... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Please Mr. D.J. ... Please Mr. D.J. ... a never ending song would be best A slow tender melody so that I may pull her close to me As I gaze into her eyes with her one hand on my chest Our legs entwined as we lose ourselves in it's eternity Give it some bass to match the pounding of our hearts Along with some treble to bring our souls to their height Smooth out the rhythm to caress us deep as this one starts Add an angels voice to lift us into the stars of the night Please Mr. D.J. ... bring me a song that will see no end One to taunt her heart and bring on a starry eyed gaze Turn the lights down low to set up that romantic trend Pump in the fog so we can get lost in a new love's haze I need a song of seduction to caress the smile on her face Soft lyrics of music mesmerizing her to leave her no choice A stirring harmony of notes bringing her to my soft embrace Bring to me tonight riding the wind ... a song of passions voice Please Mr. D.J. ... Mark Bohannan  The beauty resting in the promise of our dance is what will forever keep me on the floor. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, here you've gone and done it...another 50's classic... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* *sigh* Oh my gosh. I melted with this poem. Oh my, it goes right to the heart and embraces you. I am speechless. Soft, sensual, romantic, dreamy and fantastic. Mark you are incredible. *sigh* *sigh*Much love and a New Years kiss from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My sweet romantic friend~ And may the voice of passion be all you want it to be - and more. You've outdone yourself with this one, Mr. MarkB~. Loving you and wishing you the stars of the night to catch you two in their glow. You'll be all the seduction she needs. *giggle* Happy New Year, my friend. You know my heart will be with you. Don't forget to check your jacket pocket, cause I'll be there for one angelic dance. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, the dance of love, it is so beautiful when its working. I always loved dancing with the right person. It is ALMOST the best thing you can do together. Loved this Mark. Happy New Year, may you dance into it and through the whole year. Sandra |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Mark this was wonderful. Let the Music play on and on and on........ -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--You don't need a DJ..you got the beat, honey, you got the words, you got the heart...just do it! Happy New Year dear friend...xoxoxoxoxo |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! But you won't need a D.J., just let her hear the love beating in your heart. I wish all your dreams be fulfilled for the new year.  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Mark, very romantic! Dance on! Denise |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Music indeed sets the mood. Go get her. Melton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a wonderful poem and a gorgeous pic.. ~Pump in the fog~..like that line too ha..enjoyed..  can i borrow her gown..love it ha... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh**sigh*....oh my..you know how to stirr my heart don't you cowboy.... you are a romantic.... my friend..and I love it. Happy new year my friend, within all the best and blessings for you and your family (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Please Mr. D.J. ... a never ending song would be best A slow tender melody so that I may pull her close to me As I gaze into her eyes with her one hand on my chest Our legs entwined as we lose ourselves in it's eternity ==================== Please Mr. D.J. ... bring me a song that will see no end One to taunt her heart and bring on a starry eyed gaze Turn the lights down low to set up that romantic trend Pump in the fog so we can get lost in a new love's haze I need a song of seduction to caress the smile on her face Soft lyrics of music mesmerizing her to leave her no choice A stirring harmony of notes bringing her to my soft embrace Bring to me tonight riding the wind ... a song of passions voice ================ romantic and perfect cowboy how could a lady resist such a passsion and anticipation filled invitation I dont think she could... may your song be never ending my friend. beautiful poetry ...polish up them boots  later-twinkle-toes-gator me  |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
hey cowboy happy new year old friend im at JMs house thought id stop in for a spin this must be one special lady to have lassoed your heart I know one thing, she is one lucky lady hope your dance last forever very romantic & sincere, and i know from your heart see ya on the dance floor trisha |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
karilea-A classic is a classic though is it not? Thank you much. Karen-I don't know about the incredible but if she thinks me worthy then I will be one happy cowboy. Thank you dearly. Marge-Thank you my friend from the bottom of my heart. Or is that my pocket.LOL I would hope by now she knows the sincerity under this ole hat of mine and in my heart. Sandra-The right person makes all the difference in the world doesn't it. Thank you my dear friend. kitkat-My wish exactly. Thank you much. Martie-Polishin up my boots now my friend. Thank you so very much. Sharon-Thank you very much for those wishes. She is a very good friend that I care for deeply. They mean the world to me. I wish for you the same happiness in the coming year that I hope to capture. Denise-Thank you so much. I am glad you found it beautiful. Melton-Thank you kind sir. Music from the heart is always the best to dance to. Victoria -I think she might be needing that gown for a bit on the dance floor even with the thick fog. Thank you so much. Charisma-You are just way to sweet my friend. Thank you dearly for your always uplifting replies. JM-Well my friend, you know how I love to dance and how much music lives in my soul so I know you know that I am hoping this dance never ends. Thank you so much sweetness. Trisha-She is very special indeed. So how the heck ya doin lil sis. Don't stay away so much. Thak you my dear little one. You know that I appreciate your visits no matter how brief they are. ****Wishing you all a very WONDERFUL and SAFE NEW YEAR. Now party but do it in moderation. I expect to keep reading all of your works ya know. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Now you have the music to go with a dance for the new year. Very classy style you have. I hope the new year brings you much love and happiness! Deb HAPPY NEW YEAR!!  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here Mark ... this is splendid! You've woven these beautiful words so delicately, they simply danced across the screen. Beautiful writing my friend, and I wish you much happiness with this lovely dance partner! Best wishes for a Happy New Year! /Kit PS ... Please forgive me for not meeting that last poetic challenge ... I couldn't do it Mark ... and I tried (that scared me)! I promise to do better next time to make up for it, LOL! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deb-Thank you much my friend and I wish the same for you in the coming year. It should be a great one indeed. Kit-She is lovely indeed but her heart is even more lovely as I have come to find out. Have a great new year my friend and thank you dearly. Don't worry about that challenge. I will come up with a new one for you that can actually be met without skipping over all the rules of grammer.LOL |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful penning, Sir Mark!! Music, love, passion...all the ingredients for a perfect piece of poetry...especially in your hands |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Michael-Thank you kind sir...I do try and after all I did get most of my lessons from you didn't I? This one is special to me and you just made it more special sir. Happy New Year to you. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ooohh..cowboy mark...i feel a need to dance..and no tangable partner at my side have i... may i be your shadow..?? this may be my favorite of yours..... i like.. happy new year friend! hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
dg-Thank you my friend. Grab a partner and get on that dance floor... you don't need to shadow me. I am sure you have a song of your own to light up the sky with. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, Utterly wonderful I can hear the music it's one brilliant piece. I shall be dancing through my tears to this. No I won't I won't have any tears, they can't wash anything away, so I'll smile and go on. The song will play and I will dance. Fabulous work it really is Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marsha-Thank you my friend. I know how them late night parties can be but I am sure you will recover in a month or so. Shed them tears...get them over with.....then go tell your boss that things this year will not be so strict. I know that isn't easy sometimes but someones gotta tell him. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to put this in me library... geesh too much rasperry tea  lollater-dancing fool gator |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Mark this is so clever...I'm going to do an in depth search for that DJ I know he's out there floating through the heavens with a never ending love song in his library! I'll trap him with an ad placed in the Heavenly Daily Times WANTED: experienced DJ to play a neverending love song for man with a cup that runneth over with love! PLease respond immediatly as soulmate's heart needs to be wooed into the peaceful wonder of his heart. renumeration: the satisfaction of cultivating true love. Please call 1 800 new love I think that will do it ...I'll get right on it right away.....take care....cupid's potbellyed merry helper! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JM- Thanks my sweet friend. How does it feel to wear that blonde wig?ethome-Thank you so much kind sir. She is a very dear friend to me and I appreciate the ad. Made me smile and even chuckle a bit. My cup do runneth over in friendship for her and though it may be a bit early for calling it love, I do know that I would give all that I have to her just to see her smile. Thank you again my friend and if you get any responses to that ad please let me know. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Please Mr. D.J. The lights are turned down low And now you're playing Something soft and slow He stands there waiting His eyes speak of romance - But Mr. D.J. I never learned to dance!! Sorry, Mark... I loved your poem... but I couldn't resist. *G* (My blonde can't be conveniently packed away in a wig case... and the brat can't even be captured! *G*) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
suthern-LOL.......don't worry about capturing the brat nor the wig. I enjoyed the verse very much and I thank you for stopping by. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really liked the feel of this poem. It painted a great picture. great writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Maxtec1- thank you for stopping by.I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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