Open Poetry #11 |
Rivers of Tears.......Tanka |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Rivers of Tears majestic swimming with my reflection below in rivers of tears want to rise up from the depth to find my strength like before Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like this...the reference to the reflection below....very very good!.... rise up dear girl rise up! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah this likes me Charisma...thank you.... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ethome and sunshine...thank you for your reply....may new year brings better day's ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes we have all cried a river of tears..i know i did this year..but the tears are over...hope yours will be too..HUGSS... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now this is beautiful! One of your best! You have such a talent for these Your words and the picture go hand in hand perfectly Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ I would wish for you Joy within the depths to find Spreading smiles across The very lakes of your heart Sending ripples far beyond ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very well done Charisma ... excellent use of metaphor and emotional expression perfect amount of impact and you always find the perfect graphic great job take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Charisma ... me too, me too. Beautiful words of pending strength ... let's rise up together shall we? Best wishes for a wonderful New Year! /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well Done! I like Kit's idea, let's all rise up together. Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
majestic swimming with my reflection below in rivers of tears want to rise up from the depth to find my strength like before Beautifully written. I am sure that your strength will soon return. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Victoria: I am glad that you are over your tears....I hope that I will be over it soon, still working on it...but it needs a lot of strenght... Melissa: thank you for your kind reply and your lovely compliment I'm glad that you like this Tanka. Marge: my friend you always know how to cheer me up....thank you for your always wonderful comments.....I truly appreciate them highly. JM: thank you for reading and your comment, I am happy that you love the tanka and the picture... Kit and Eagle: yeah let's do that...rising up together, so we will find that strength ..wonderful idea....wishing you all a lot of strength and the best in this new year Brian: thank you for your kind reply...and I am sure that I will find my strength again..I am a fighter...I guess. wishing you all the best in this new year. |
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