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It's New Year's Here...!!!
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It's New Year's Here...!!! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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 Behold this day a year anew Regale the dawn with welcome tide What e’er tomorrow may ensue Cast yesterday’s lament aside Regale the dawn with welcome tide Pine not for auld lang syne now spent Cast yesterday’s lament aside Apprised from time in precedent Pine not for auld lang syne now spent Life’s guarantee by moments found Apprised from time in precedent There’s surety in life’s redound Life’s guarantee by moments found Rejoice in each new morning ray There’s surety in life’s redound Foresee ahead enlightened day Rejoice in each new morning ray Futurity’s from past defined Foresee ahead enlightened day Embrace the new with open mind Futurity’s from past defined What e’er tomorrow may ensue Embrace the new with open mind Behold this day a year anew… Happy New Year Everyone!!!Drive Safely |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Happy New Year to to you too, Nan!! Is this one of those paradelle thingies? Beautifully done! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ You are just amazing ! This is stunNANing ! And the best to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO, MY FRIEND! YES< MAY THE NEW YEAR BRING GREAT CHEER AND JOY FOR US ALL! THANK YOU FOR SHARING, MY FRIEND! MAY LOVE AND LIGHT ALWAYS SHINE UPON YOU! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Afternoon Nancy, And a very "HAPPY NEW YEARS" to you. You not only write with excellence, you are also quite a woman. It's my pleasure knowing you. thanks Nan, BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, A wonderful and Happy New Year to you. *L* |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Nan, this is great and I wish you the Happiest of New Year's !! ME |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I said it before and I'll say it again... the perfect Nantoum... oops Pantoum.  Happy New Year Nan !  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ooops....hehehe......I mean, it that one of those pantoum thingies? Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A Pantoum?? What's a Pantoum???  Great one Nan. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Happy New Year to you as well This is phenomenally written and I love the technique you used by using the second line of each stanza and placing it as the first line in the next and so on...you make it look so easy and it flows like a song, and yet I know that it's a challenge to do. You're one of the masters of perfect rhyme!Take care, Melissa< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nantastic! and nothing else! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Fantastic way to send your wishes and I send them right back at you. HAVE A GREAT AND SAFE NEW YEAR!!!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks guys... CHEERS... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Nan, you are positive pantoumazing! Beautifully written, and the flow was superb ... excellent poem Nan, I really enjoyed this! Best wishes for a wonderful New Year! /Kit |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
What a great poem for the new year! Deb HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Can't ya just say Happy New Year like everybody else? No, of course you can't. You're the NAN!!!....which means all class! HAPPY NEW YEAR, DEAR NAN!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
BUMPING all of the New Year's poems to the Top!!!!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the positive attitude of this excellent poem...there is nothing more healthy than a positive outlook and I think you are bringing in the new year in such a wonderful way!! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nan, You the "teach" must surely be to have writ so wonder-fully Doc |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 and the best wishes for you and your family. ((hugs) Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nan--Wonderful pantoum...Happy new year!!! |
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