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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Travesty I know, that when I think of you and I and the summer your warmed in my skin the dreams you conjured in my eyes and all the fantasies you built in my life... I see beauty. But to you, I know it's all just a travesty that you wrestle with everytime you wonder ...why you ever showed me beauty at all. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
so I question...what was learned...and will it last?... well done! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
surely you have learned, as Sunshine said. . . Elise, you keep amazing me. . .  wonderful words. . . ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Do we ever learn? I don't know, but this is wonderful. He was a fool, obviously. Sandra |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, i always say this...if at first you don't succeed, quit!... er.. i mean... do unto others and then split!... no WAIT! that's not it...... umm...er, i mean... home is where the hard is... oh phooey... i'm gonna get this right yet... umm... i say something.. uh... ok... i got it!... ready? here it is...you only live once so grab for all the gusto you can get... awwww dammit!!!... that's a beer commercial... *sigh* well, when i think of what i always say, i'll let you know and come back to this thread or just write a poem about it or something but for now... lemme just say this... loved your poem!!!!  |
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