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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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When the sun goes down across the horizon, and all things are quiet, the only peace you hear over the island are the sounds of crickets and a few frogs sending their melody to your ears, as I look across the seas vast darkness and feel the cool ocean spray gently raining over my body, I know in my dreams tonight I will be the one kissing your neck, and softly saying in your ear how I miss you when you aren't around, as I look to the stars of the east to wish upon my secret desire, I see you there, and your smile tugs once again at my heart, come caress my spirit, comfort my soul, and reign your peace over me (and) though I don't say the words very often, I know in my heart you know "MAG" I love you always~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Greeneyes? you should say them more often... you say them so well! I know these dreams...sighs and hugs to you! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know these dreams too. . . in fact, have you been in mine?? Because this is just like them. . . Wonderful poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
{{{{hugs}}}} - I'm sure he knows - This is exquisite |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in my dreams tonight I will be the one kissing your neck, and softly saying in your ear how I miss you when you aren't around, as I look to the stars of the east to wish upon my secret desire, I see you there, and your smile tugs once again at my heart, come caress my spirit, comfort my soul, and reign your peace over me (and) though I don't say the words very often, I know in my heart you know =============== he knows now...  this is lovely GE ... written like a softly whispered promise wonderful serene writing take care poetess jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
serenity~ your words are much appreciated...thank you~ and i do say them, but only in my dreams... < !signature--> Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ awwww in your dreams? *L* tell ya what you visit mine, and I'll visit yours...deal? be well my friend...and thank you for making me smile... Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I know these dreams so well. You have expressed them beautifully. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ theres a saying goes says that "love is blind" still we're often told seek and ye shall find" LR ~sigh~ the if onlys and what ifs.....thanks for the hug.... Peace my friendGreeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JM~ softly, I love that word....thank you....awww all I can do is sigh~....you, too be well.... Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
catalinamoon~ thank you for stopping in and letting me know, it is so appreciated... Happy Holidays, With Peace~ Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I would say that he most assuredly knows now. My gawd girl.....this was beautiful. Truely spoken from a heart that FEELS the love not just sees it. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read Greeneyes... My compliments 2u4 this splendid write... Coco |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Wish that I could have dreams like this. Wonderful poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"though I don't say the words very often, I know in my heart you know" Such beautiful imagery and description... wonderful writing, my friend. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunshine~ thanks so much for your kind words~ MarkB~ Sigh, I am not so sure he does, thank you for always responding as you do....it does make me smile.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Passions Voice~ they are only my dreams... < !signature--> thank you for letting me know you were here...I appreciate it much...Happy Holidays with Peace...Lovebug~ Thank you....for your kind words... Happy Holidays my friend With PeaceCocoBaci~ WOW I have never gotten splendid, thats a great feeling, thank you... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ How delicately sung are these melodious thoughts. 'as I look across the seas vast darkness and feel the cool ocean spray gently raining over my body' Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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