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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-30 08:51 PM


As I Gather In

tonight I shall
gather in my thoughts
gather in my love
gather in my lot

I shall gather in my soul
take control
and like a crystal bowl
shall hold all
and shine

as I gather in
all memories
all lost histories
long kept stories
I shall gather in to trust
without fuss
all I must

for this is my foundation
as I am part of a creation
No, I did not ask for this existence
but revel in its insistence
that I am here
for the here and now
and in that somehow
I shall leave a mark
before I park it
all away

I shall gather in

should just one look back
from the beyond
and know I was on
this earth

should just one look back
when I am gone
and judge me
worthy of my birth

perhaps they too
shall gather me in

yes, I have sinned
and I have repented
and unrelenting
I forgive

for I could not live
in stricter course
for the remorse
would do me in

please do not think me absurd
if I seem a little unsure
for I am not, no, not really;
I just think that to not forgive
would not fit me, really…
as I am more live and let live…

so as I gather in my thoughts
over what was wrought
in the past years and century
know that I share now
my gifts somehow
and that I wish you, surely,

to gather in
the love of you
to carry you through
this life

do gather in
all that you are
because you too
were born under a star

and it is what you do
and how it's done
that will brighten your days
under the morning sun

so gather it in
and make it fine
and know that you
are in these thoughts of mine.

12.30.00


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-30 08:58 PM


Karilea~

gathering

~*Marge*~


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2 posted 2000-12-30 08:59 PM


Kari, this is so special. I aspire to write half as well as this someday.
Happy New Year.
Sandra

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3 posted 2000-12-30 09:21 PM


very wise and true words, sunshine. Everything we do, have done and feel makes up what we are....the good and the bad. Many times we tend to ignore the bad or mistakes made but, in reality, everything that we have touched or has touched us is the fabric of our essence...it's not only what our actions have been but how we have reacted to them and used them to make ourselves stronger....and, if somehow we can serve as a good example to someone through our actions and our show of forgiveness of others, our time on this earth has been justified.
   Jeez, you got me waxing philosophically here, Sunshine.....well, call it wool-gathering  

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4 posted 2000-12-30 09:25 PM



to gather in
the love of you
to carry you through
this life

do gather in
all that you are
because you too
were born under a star

and it is what you do
and how it's done
that will brighten your days
under the morning sun

so gather it in
and make it fine
and know that you
are in these thoughts of mine.

Inspirational stuff sunshiny girl....well penned hon  
~HUGS~
Tracie
Oh and a very Happy New Year


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-12-30 09:29 PM


Marge, yes....

Cat...I just told my mate I was "not good enough" and here you go, trying to prove otherwise...what a wonderful thing for you to say, to one who is not yet sure...

'Deer...what can I say...first you offer "cotton" and then you offer "wool"...I think I will wrap myself in both and stay warm all of this cold, snowy winter, and smile...thank you Sir...wax all you want, the candles will glow...

EagleOne
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6 posted 2000-12-30 09:42 PM


Always a treat read your work. Some wonderful thoughts.


"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



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7 posted 2000-12-30 09:59 PM


may you gather in what you have sown
golden wheat and brightest sun
words of love from heart so warm
tender stories told once more

for in your gathering we hold you
close to our hearts always
tender poet and compassionate friend
indeed we shall gather you,
         until the end. . .

sorry Karilea, just feeling very poetic tonight. . .  

beautiful poem. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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8 posted 2000-12-31 08:13 AM


Tracie, warm hugs right back...so glad you liked this one...

Eagle One, thank you...

Sven, never apologize for penning such lovely responses...'tis unseemly!...LOL...thank you my friend...

ethome
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9 posted 2000-12-31 08:36 AM


I'd like to gather you in and give ya a big kiss! But then that husband would hunting me forever......but maybe the stress would be worth it just thinking about it all in perspective. This is fabulous stuff! Karilea you certainly have this wonderful inner soul that pours out in your words and phrases.
I agree with your thoughts and the reflections here and I for one am very appreciative of the wonderful gift of consciousness that the grand creator has bestowed upon me...for with it I can share with all of the poets here the beautiful language of poetry....thanks for these thoughts......have a great new year..ethome

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10 posted 2000-12-31 08:44 AM


for this is my foundation
as I am part of a creation
No, I did not ask for this existence
but revel in its insistence
that I am here
for the here and now
and in that somehow
I shall leave a mark
before I park it
all away
===================
trust me...you shall ... you already have.
Happy New Year K.
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-12-31 03:57 PM


Ethome, just gather up sun's rays and revel in the warm...and thank you for your kind thoughts and words...have a most Joyous New year...

JanetMarie...you've been a kind and sweet soul to this old lady this whole year...thank you for all that you've done for me...

Lady Lightning
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12 posted 2000-12-31 04:08 PM


tonight I shall
gather in my thoughts
gather in my love
gather in my lot

I shall gather in my soul
take control
and like a crystal bowl
shall hold all
and shine

as I gather in
all memories
all lost histories
long kept stories
I shall gather in to trust
without fuss
all I must

for this is my foundation
as I am part of a creation
No, I did not ask for this existence
but revel in its insistence
that I am here
for the here and now
and in that somehow
I shall leave a mark
before I park it
all away

I shall gather in

Guess it must be the beginning of a new year that these words hit me so hard...Another year of being uncertain what direction my life is headed...Reading this made me feel somehow comforted though, and I thank you for that...Hugs and a HAPPY NEW YEAR to you... ~LL~



The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Sunshine
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13 posted 2000-12-31 06:53 PM


Lady, you gathered in the lines I liked the best myself...thank you so much for reading...it is SO appreciated, more than you know...Happy New Year to you...
Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-12-31 07:29 PM


Karilea ... for all that you do ... for all that you write ... for all of your genuine words of wisdom and beauty ... I thank you.  

Best wishes for a Happy New Year,
/Kit

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15 posted 2000-12-31 07:46 PM


a lovely write..the new year has a way of making one reflect on the past and mistakes..and finding forgiveness in ones heart..for those who have hurt us..nicely written and Happy new year to you too Sunshine HUGS

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Sunshine
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16 posted 2000-12-31 10:06 PM


Kit, my friend, genuine I am...thank you...

Victoria, my reflections don't begin at the New Year, I do it every day...and I so appreciate your Hugs...thank you...

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