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Your Eyes
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Your Eyes |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Your Eyes By Richard Maxfield 6-21-2000 With in your eyes I see A thousand new suns rise I see only loving truth No deceit no lies I see my eternal further No reflection of my past I see my new tomorrow From the first to last I see the depth of souls Marching a million strong Pathways to heaven Narrow straight and long I see babies crying For their Mothers arms Fathers standing strong Keeping all safe from harm I see a white doves wing To lift me far above Sooth my broken heart Fill it full of love I see my very one For whom my heart longs Filling my days with joy My mouth full of songs I see a faint reflection Of my very soul Rapture me to your heaven From this mortal place |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful and tender, I like this much.  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Too see so much in another's eyes is a beautiful thing. A beauty you expressed well in your poem.  I am no one if not myself. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maxtec1, Take an asprin and call me in the morning. LOL Enjoyed the poem. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful writing, Richard....reminds me of the Johnny Mathis song... In your eyes, I see the magic of the sea I see the beauty of the love The love I feel you feel for me Autumn comes....summer dies I see the passing of the years In your eyes ANd when we part there'll be no tears No goodbyes I'll just look into your eyes those eye so wise so warm so real I love the world your eyes reveal....... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening maxtec1, Much is seen in those eyes that you look into. She is a lucky person, for you to see so much, and to be able to write it down, as you have done. BC |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Richard, I just spent some time at your homepage...wonderful poetry. And I LOVE the photos!!! |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you all for the comments. I wrote this poem in memorie of someone I onceknew. My wife. Now I see is some one I no longer know. Love and light, Richard |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely rich and enjoyed your website too.. happy holidays.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know how I missed this one Richard but I'm glad I finally found it! This is just wonderful writing, I really enjoyed it so much> You wrote all those wonderful romantic things about the eyes so well! |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you ladies for your wonderful comments. love and light, Richard |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Beautiful, tender words here, Richard..So much can be seen in the eyes..You see alot there with this one... Hugs...~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfectly romantic and lovely, Richard. Keep this up,I love reading it. Sandra |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Sandra love and light, Richard |
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