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RobertB
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0 posted 2000-12-31 07:14 PM



Finally


I finally looked ahead
and realized
that I had missed
the whole point
of life
behind.

I finally listened close
and understood
what sounds
should be
heard.

I finally felt the touch
of feelings deep
inside
and held on
tight.....

Finally
is never too
late.


Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-12-31 07:16 PM


"Finally
is never too
late."

So very true Robert ... wonderfully inspirational, I really enjoyed these thoughts, nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-12-31 07:17 PM


BRAVO...

RobertB
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3 posted 2000-12-31 07:19 PM


Thank you.....maybe I have finally made it.


Robert

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-12-31 07:24 PM


RobertB~
All we are - is what we were.
All we know - is what we heard.
All we can be - is what we have felt.
Tomorrow contains all of our yesterdays.

To know this is to say, "Yes, I have arrived."

Congratulations on finally !
It's NEVER too late !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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5 posted 2000-12-31 07:29 PM


Many good thoughts here, Robert.  It's hard to hold on to "feeling" but really they are never right or wrong, just our feelings. Enjoyed this.

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



Victoria
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6 posted 2000-12-31 07:38 PM


hard to give up one or the other robt..but lovely sounds give us nice feelings..and nice feelings make the whole world sing for us...but no its never too late to realize anything..HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



RobertB
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Champaign, IL
7 posted 2000-12-31 09:01 PM


ahhhh thank you my friends
Denise
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8 posted 2000-12-31 09:44 PM


That's an amazing realization, isn't it, Robert? You're right. It's never too late! Great writing, as always!

Denise

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