Open Poetry #11 |
Churning |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
CHURNING Virginia Salter churning, churning, in my stomach blecky, blecky in my throat weaving, weaving in my headnod feel like I’m left in the boat what should I do to stop this spinning what would be the road to take won’t you help me in my plight, sir stop these waves, drain the lake leaves are dancing ballerinas green is coating tongue and cheeks dinner’s odors waft unwanted past my nose, they really reek! © October 26, 2000 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like the same thing I've had for the past three weeks.....hope you feel better soon! Denise |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Denise. Please note, I wrote this in October and I think it was something I ate. I didn't get the flu until the week before Christmas. ;o}{ Three weeks!? I hope it's over for you and that you are feeling much better! |
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