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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I will because I said I would I will because you want me too I will because it is right I will but then I will cry... Julie :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it really stinks to do the right thing doesn't it?? excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Morning JulieAnn, Glad that I came by to read your writing, as it is very beautiful. And so much meaning you have said. BC |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This was a great poem...I relate to this one well...never worded it as good as you did though.  Angel I am no one if not myself. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
There is much depth to this and I hope others read it. Reading it over and over I see it, feel it. So many thoughts come to mind and I am reminded of a song by Meat Loaf "I would do anything for love" and he doesn't really state what he means but he said he wouldn't do it! This reminded me of that. Yours showed more maturity and courage in my opinion. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Just follow your heart, it holds the answers enjoyed the poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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