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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2000-12-29 10:10 PM



   Little snowflakes swirling
               fallling gently down
             little snowflakes twirling
           landing softly on the ground.

            Little snowflakes spiraling
              drifting through the air
             little snowflakes whirling
           delicately resting in our hair.

            Little snowflakes we catch
             on the tips of our tongues
             little snowflakes we watch
             making us feel so young.

              As little snowflakes fall
          we walk together hand in hand
          little snowflakes surrounding all
           stealing a kiss from my man.

          Exchanging looks and laughter
          snowflakes pirouetting in the air
            knowing there is  no other
           with this day I  wish to share.


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-29 10:20 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is written with angels' breath...beautiful...
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2000-12-29 10:27 PM


Sunshine, thanks with BIG SMILES.  I appreciate your kind comments and warm heart.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


Denise
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3 posted 2000-12-29 10:56 PM


This brought back happy childhood memories of frolicking in the snow....way back when I still liked snow.....hehehe......beautiful, Gentle Spirit!

Denise

Victoria
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4 posted 2000-12-30 12:03 PM


we have 20 inches here..but i missed it falling since i was away..all cleared to the side of the road by the time i got back..sweet images Donna..enjoyed

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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5 posted 2000-12-30 02:24 AM


There are lots of little snowflakes coming tonight. Does that mean a bunch of kisses?
Lovely poem
Liz

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2000-12-30 06:44 AM


          Exchanging looks and laughter
          snowflakes pirouetting in the air
            knowing there is  no other
           with this day I  wish to share.

so sweetly written D...

~Softsmiles
M (whoops I mean ~Wynter)...still waiting for that storm here *s


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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7 posted 2000-12-30 06:46 AM


Oh this is so tenderly beautiful, lovely read so very well penned.
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2000-12-30 08:54 AM


Denise, I guess I'm still a bit of a kid Cuz I still like the
snow....just not driving in it.  Thanks.  

Victoria, we were suppossed to get a lot of snow today,
but so far no snow.  Thanks for stopping in.  *s*

Elizabeth, if it means I get lots of kisses, LET IT SNOW< LET IT SNOW
LET IT SNOW!!!   Thanks hon.  *w*

Wynter, I've been waiting on that storm.  I remember the pictures
you did during last years snow.  Was so beautiful.  Hugs and Happy New
year to you from me and April.

Tracie, thanks so much I do appreciate your kind words.  


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


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