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Someday My Princess Will Come
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Someday My Princess Will Come |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Someday My Princess Will Come By: Noah Eaton 12/29/00 Somewhere out there in the wild blue yonder The love of my life whispers her words to the wind, longing for them to find me As I stare out the altar of the castle of my heart, lucubrating my words of love for this special person In whom is blindfolded to my eyes and forever visits me in my dreams The stained-glass windows are filled with the art and beauty of the visions I have of her Her lovely face shines on the faience that decorates the walls of my kitchen I think of her all the time, as I yearn for her, longing to make these dreams real From the tower of this castle, gussied up in my love for her, I continue to share my words of love, singing from paper, my companion My pen, the messanger of my heart, is pulled out of the scabbard of my heart, the receiver I hold it high into the air, and let loves words drip out from it’s tip like a cataract sung a rock-a-bye Sweet soft downpours of hearts voice come cascading down to the stream below The voices tap the water, ripples of passion slide out across the water, carrying loves voice in it’s eternal smile In the cathedral of this castle, I pray to Thee that my message reaches the one I love My voice that longs to speak to her, leading her down the floriferous meadows of my heart to the castle I want you, love, I need you more than anything in the world Let me hold your hand and take you to this magical world of love of mine Standing with chilly hands, my warm heart still beats with promise that I’ll find her someday As I softly sheath the pen of my heart into it’s scabbard, I crawl into my bed and fall asleep As I dream again of this girl that I fall in love with, but comfortly knowing That someday my princess will come… |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, this is an interesting write, I like the words you use, some of them are imaginative. To speak of love in such a way is a marvel write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Noah, my friend. . . you've read my mind. . . to a T. . . this is excellent. . .  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
HEY  there ARE some romantic men left...lemme say that if she doesn't come she's nuts! nice write Noah, I hope your true love comes to you soon, as well as hoping mine does too. |
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